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Prose fantasy — no wonder you face them with a smile...

'of how the last kiss I tasted, tasted of me' .... oh la la!!

You make me smile! Whether by will or skill, I cannot always decide. This is excellent writing, swallowed... the uppity people call it "literature." *smile*

Not a big fan of prose poems, so some of this is may in deference to the better poet below, BUT I do like that Hee-Haw smile, takes guts to put it in, it sounds so self effacing, so unpoetical, thereforth it is (poetry).