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by Grayhorse1960
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Anonymousover 2 years agoToo much, too long, nice sentiment but an erotic poem is not a historical epic. Put the idea in 20-30 lines and give us all our knickers back
swiftlytiltingover 2 years agoGosh, anonymous would hate my poems then! Mine are super long. I think your poem is beautiful. It feels poignantly sad to me, yet touched with rich, bittersweet joy. Thank you for sharing.
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Grayhorse1960@Grayhorse196040 year as an engineer in a major Australian utility, now retired to a small farm in the country where it snows in winter to raise sheep, learn how to play piano again, and try to ride motorbikes more often.
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