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erectus123erectus123over 8 years ago
CarrieQ is not just a critic - 5 - great rhyme and rhythm

she is a skilled writer specializing in transsexual stories. No doubt the poem illustrates not her problem but one that many men have, i.e. cuming to quick. Today there are medications that keep a penis from shooting it's load to quickly so all is not lost on the stocking leg or floor before being welcomed by the target of interest. My sister once met with a guy who upon embracing her when she entered his apartment, came all over her dress. He offered to pay for the dry cleaning but she remarked, "If only you were."

Oh yes, the cumings and going of human sexuality are filled with pot holes. Most men under 35 are naturals, show them a glory hole or any orifice and they are off to the races, depositing their inhibitions in a timely fashion; but there is no more cutting disapproval of one's performance sexually then that of a partner whose gas tank was unfilled. And the price of petrol is forever going up across the pond. Thanks, dear CarrieQ for gifting us with one of your rare poems.

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Mature TV with cynical outlook. Stories are based on experience, anecdote and fantasy, in no particular order. Non refert quo eam.