All Comments on 'Whose Face'

by wakingDown

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greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 10 years ago

Like the way lines 4 and 6 work together: "flesh do I dress," " hollowed identidy."

This short poem says a lot. The sparse language sets the tone well too.

This is well written, wakingdown. It made me pause and think about things I wouldn't have otherwise. I measure a poem's impact on me by how much time I reflect on it. This was not 30 seconds and toggle to next one in "New Poems."

Thanks for posting it.

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