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LeBrozabout 17 years ago~~
While the rhyme structure's consistent, it feels that something's 'off' here; perhaps it's the meter. Still, sure to please the BDSM niche readers.
BOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years agoHmmm...
Hmmm...sound more like a gang member iniation.
When I read it and listen to the meter...it needs to be longer.
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