All Comments on 'zmp~ Butterfly in a Hurricane'

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RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Love the imagery here !!!!

You have my 5 my friend.

I love this poem. I saw it on the threads and was hoping you would submit it.

This poor lil butterfly leaves one rooting for it. I just wanna scoop it up and bring it in. I love how you paint your poems Art. This one is full of emotion and such promise. Then danged if'n ya don't bring it in ... bad boy !! lol

Love it !!! More Please ~

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

A nice finish

from your start on the thread;

pause and look ~

in the face of the storm,

we are as butterflies......

sweet GA peachessweet GA peachesover 18 years ago
quite a bit

of imagination

wrapped tightly

into your words cocoon.

This was utterly,

sweeeeeeeeet.

-sGp-

Scott N. LeavittScott N. Leavittover 18 years ago
**5**

GREAT!! I love the ZMPs you write ZMA!!!

MORE PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
am glad that

wee butterfly has you as a friend...I have under glass a beautiful BLUE Butterfly a rare on from the amazon qp bought for me...I wished I could have seen it fly when it was living...nice touches Art...lovely...luvfromtheblue

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Butterflies Can't Handle High Winds

That's all you needed to say. It's nature. It's not sad, it's not inspiring, it's not beautiful. It just is.

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