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With rhythmic variance

you make me feel

I'm traveling the road

along with you;

life seen with new vision

with vistas of hills

never ending;

and wondering what

you'll serve up with next

mountain to climb...have you ever climbed a mountain and found a rainbow in the dark...just on the other side pointing to the peaks of a higher mountain...like a elfin pot of gold...great one...ole great one...lol/blue

YES!! I know about roads!!! This is so true!! I see this everyday. But I did not think about this as you say it until now!!! EXCELENT!!! ZMA!!!!!!!

I love poems offering light and possibility. Thanks for the mood lifter

very rhythmically done my friend!

good job!

Kisses,

T