by My Erotic Trail
Nicely done Art, but feels like there are too many words {next thing you know, you'll have invigorated my slumbering muse!}.
Rich in Sight and Images. Sparce but so clean and direct. A Poem for which you should be justifiable proud. A thing of beauty - lovely to read ~ then read once more.
Anyone who knows me knows I enjoy simplicity and unfussiness, ergo, I enjoy this poem. Almost fugue-like.
Tess