- Non-Erotic Poetry
- ZMP~ Tomorrow's Sun ...
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I will be
a stone one day
but for now I will be
the living clay
Like a drop I may
dry up in the sun
but for now I will
with the river run
I may be
a star one day
but for now I will
light my own way.
A leaf in the wind
blowing away
as I hold to a tree
till my leaving day.
Just another flower
under the sun
beauty is in living
until I'm done.
Like the wild grass
reaching high,
spread my seed
then I lie.
I may not see
tomorrow's sun
but until then
I'll watch it come!
- COMMENTS
~hellbaby~almost 19 years agoMy favorite line is the one about the star too. It makes you feel hmm, I don't know, really neat.
dcpoet44almost 19 years agois rendered throughout the piece. favorite lines:
I may be
a star one day
but for now I will
light my own way.
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from a writers point of view. one can see the dream. i did notice the boxed format from top to bottom. line breaks may be an issue though. but i'm not a god in that arena...*LOL*
Meladiealmost 19 years agoSmoooth!! Very nice!
I may be
a star one day
but for now I will
light my own way.
A leaf in the wind
blowing away
as I hold to a tree
till my leaving day.
These were my favorites stanzas.
Thanks!
Jennifer Calmost 19 years agoAre you kidding me? I
think this is one of my
favorite's of yours! I love
the simplicity of your words and
the gentle beautiful flow.
I may be
a star one day
but for now I will
light my own way.
Loved that bit!
A poem doesn't have
to be full of long and
complicated words to
be profound or meaningful.
I really enjoyed this piece
and for me it gets top marks!
Thanks.
~ J
Aunty Musealmost 19 years agoThe thought is good. The words' O.K. - The construction is weak.
