by My Erotic Tale
Looking the real
with eyes youthful fresh
but I still like my thought from the thread
I love the visuals and the simplicity of the work. Something missing though in the last line. I would rework it. It lacks the power of the rest of the poem. Otherwise a wonderful ZMP again my friend
du~
You know I love your work
my friend, but then apparently
i'm a gusher!...lol
but i really like the feel of this
and it flows beautifully.
Thanks for the ZMP,
~ Jenn
I LIKE ZMPS!!! This is good & Im glad your tree is just old & not dead to!!!
where have all the old beards gone?
they hang from limbs,
long and gray,
shading the belly of a tree.
and somewhere, mossy men
tug curiously
at their spanish whiskers.