All Comments on '1derful Tease Ch. 01'

This story is very sensuous, the thoughts she has are very real, I really enjoyed it!

Can't wait for the continuation. Very well written, just enough to keep you on the edge but not enough for the release. Like I said cant' wait.

Thanks all for reading votes and sending feedback. I am truely amazed and quite pleased thanks.

Part two was submitted at the same exact time as part one. I don't know why it says still pending. I would guess it will be posted soon, I hope it is. I intended to post both chapters together as to not leave people hanging. I am sorry, but it ain't my falt really I tried.

Kisses and thanks to all you wonderful nice openminded people who made me feel great about sharing this story.

Kay~

One of the best written story-! so exciting!

Want more soon, to see how the horny duaghter make dad "Fuck" her hard--! please be s--oo-n-!

Incredible writing, keep up the awesome work.

You have woven this story so well. I can picture it happening in my head. You have built the story up and added sexual tension. You need to continue this story and relieve the tension. Thanks.

I think you must have lived this story, it seems so real to what young people fanticize about that you have tapped into every man's feelings.. Please continue your fine story..

very real... wonderful tension build up.. am rushing to the next chapter.....

More please. Very well written. Almost a copy book of something that happened to me 30 years ago.

Please let's read chapter 3....

I hope you'll tell us then how dad's hard cock penetrated Kay's wet lips and got buried deep inside her warm tight and loving vagina...

Please tell us how much pleasure Kay's velvet vagina was able to give dad's hungry cock...

Please tell us how tightly and passionately Kay hugged dad's cock with her pulsating vagina and made dad moan and gasp in pure pleasuer...

Please tell us how eagerly and curiously was Kay watching dad's face as he entered her to see how much was she able to pleasure his hard cock...

Please tell us how dad shot his hot sticky cum deep inside his daughter, Kay...

only wish I was a father with such an open relationship as Mr Ross has with his daughter.

Every time I read a story of yours, my cock gets hard and throbbing and I have to get back to your picture to play with my hard cock looking at your blue panties. I usually shoot my cum while doing so.

Thank you for pleasuring our hard cocks...

I like the way the story builds. Their relationship tentative at first, and getting hotter by the paragraph.

i am so hot and horny reading ur stories carry on the good work

I loved this storie and I hope she gets her dream with her Dad. Excellant writing as well. It was smooth and interesting , not choppy.

That is HOT I love the way you're building the tension between them. I see in my mind, the play, the responses of one to the other. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to more of this story.

Great story! Loved how you build the sexual tension as the story progresses. Just a helpful hint, however; use an editor. The story would be about perfect without the distraction of errors. Keep up the good work.

really loved your stories, made my so horny , can't wait to read the next one.

my panties are sooo wet...looks like I'll be cleaning the stain from my chair...I loved how you made the tension & anticipation build up...I'm rubbing myself to your next story.

What a wonderful story. Brought back many happy memories of growing up.

Anne

talk about a build up and DAMN her Mom coming home then.. although....it's got my mind racing as my clit throbs, sitting here....amazing story....another wet pussy caused from the excitement.

thanks!

You gotta finish this story

The foreplay and tension is awesome!Would def. loved some more action .. but I guess that would have to wait until you complete this =)

xoxo, cant wait!

Very good, sitting here with a big hard one

Had a hard on from about the fifth paragraph down to the very end, and it's still here waiting for me to take care of it. This story is sooo hot, I'm just flushed red.

MADE ME NEARLY CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUM....

This is awesome I love it

Oh those girls are sooo whorish its kinda gross

THE INTERACTION BETWEEN THE DAUGHTER AND FATHER IS QUITE EROTIC AND HAS GIVEN A STIFFNESS IN A SPECIAL AREA

Nice! Keep writing more like this!

Better get him before ybsf does. I know I would. <G>

Just how much more erotic can you make this? I'm siting on my dad's lap and reading this with him. ie: having his penis in me. This is hot. And we both love it. Tanya and my Daddy

omg, if only I'd have such a daughter. awesome story, thank you.

So, the stepdad is Only 12 years older than the (legally 18) stepdaughter?? Sounds like a younger sister/older brother lust story instead to me. If the step dad was actually Old enough to be her daddy this story would be much more enticing but after I find out that he's only about 30/31 I fine this story to be just ok. I'm falling asleep just rereading it now.....boring.