All Comments on '1derful Tease Ch. 02'

Excellent! This girls' education continues. Looking for more and increasing lusty adventures. Is daddy really auch a naughty, lusty, pervert? Let's hope so. And is the daughter a wanton lust possessed ever-creamy cunt? Let's hope so.

That was great! Please continue.

I want to say thanks to the many nice comments and thanks for the votes. Yipee! I am glad the story is well appreciated. I was a little scared before it posted.

I will continue to reply here and to read the posts under the story.

I will try to answer the questions that I can, or feel comfortable answering.

I am writing another story which is not related to this one, other than me. Then I will continue with this story I promise.

Is it fantasy or real well it is based on real and it has some truth obviously. I am not going to say what is real or what is added you will have to decide that on your own.

I will relate more of what happened the next morning in Ch3. I was going to skip that as it was a little bit awkward to express, but it seems many really want to know.

I will check back in here later and try to answer what questions are posted.

*Smiles* Thanks I am very happy with your comments, you have all made me feel good about posting this story.

Kay~

Keep it going. It is a great start..

Couldn't put it down.

am looking forward to more submissions Kay.. great start!!

Please Cuntinue....Hot Stuff

Hot story, hot ass! mmmmmmmmm, mmmmmmmm

DW

Thanks all so much for the wonderful comments. I have just submitted the other story I was kicking around. I will get to work on Ch3

Kay~

Excellent, lively description of "fuckin"! very Hot --

want more --

Very lively description of "fucking" --very erotic!

want more !

That was an amazing story can't wait to read chapter 3!!!

no need to say more

I am almost completed CH 3 Thanks for all the wonderful comments, and letters. I do read them all! Soon very soon!

I would love to thank you and congratulate you on this great exciting stories...

My cock got hard and I felt a great urge to touch myself...Then I wanted to know more about you and when I saw your sexy picture I couldn't help but jack off my hard cock looking at your picture and thinking about you as my female sex partner...

Muy caliente!

wow hot stuff you know how to turn me on

i forgot i was reading and felt i was looking in on a young girls life. its better than the beauty series by anne rice

More than sperb

This story is so fucking hot! I've had to keep my viborator in my pussy on HIGH!

Not only hot, but also very sensuously written. It gave a beautifull feeling, and the sense of the girl's feelings came out very well.

Thanks for agood story.

Slangeno.

WOW That was the best story I ever read

God, this is a very erotic story! I only find the grammatical mistakes to be distracting. Correct those, and I would've given it a 100%.

Extremely erotic, a little too much talking, but it didn't get irrelevant or boring; instead it heightened the eroticy. I agree with the Texan that says the grammatical errors were confusing and distracting, but good work!

I'm going to read more but first...I'm off to slide my fingers around my wet pussy.......loved it!

Great discriptive story. It made me very hard and I felt like I was fucking her myself. I can understand the lady who said she needed to work on her pussy after reading the story. You write good sex and make it real and hot. If a story doesn`t give me a hardon than it`s not worth reading. Your story did.Please give me more hardons.

John P

I had to bite my clit to keep myself from coming.

Jane

Toledo OH

So hot... I'm gasping. I need to go and relieve myself before I can read more ;)

That was the best story written lately but i feel sorry for the stupid wife she doesnt know that she has a loving and great husband at home and a great step father to her daughter so she better get her head out of her bum if she doesnt want a war with the daughter and the daughters friend over him.

Pat.

*clap, clap, clap*

bravo, ma'am. this is so well put together that i almost feel bad about stroking off to it.

this really made me hot.Keep it yummy.

One suggestion: pick a tense and stick with it. Constantly alternating between present and past tense is distracting to the reader.

That was great - I'm soaked!! Can't wait to read about her dad watching his friends fuck her!!

You need to re-read the story bud... The FATHER is the one that's turned on by his wife going out with HIS buddies... In effect, he is sending the mother out with them...

You need to re-read the story bud... The FATHER is the one that's turned on by his wife going out with HIS buddies... In effect, he is sending the mother out with them...

Wonderful. What really got me was the emotion between them. I can't wait to read further. ^.-

but when you used the word 'sausage' it turned me off so much I cant read any further.

Gets the juces flowing. Easy to feel like you are there and very addictive.

Ok this was beautiful... just the right amount of teasing and completely sexy. I adored it, wonderful work.

he inserted his finger and ran it around the edges...... FUCK. Are you trying to kill me? That was INSANE!!! I loved it. I love being fingered and that had me cumming instantly! Thank you. Now, could we continue with her fucking his friends while he watches? Mmmm. I want them to finger her endlessly while he watches. Let them play with her pretty little cunt. Please?

Love it this is hot stuff. I love all the emotion

God these are hot stories and I love the detail in the writing,,can't wait to get to the next chapter