All Comments on '2008 Ch. 09'

WHen you began this you stated 10 Chapters....I don't think you will be able to finish in 10 too many loose ends. Christmas should be fun tho

Looks like it is all coming together. The addition of Elissa is wonderful and a great gift to her and the others in this family.

But as usual in life, trouble (or oppurtunity) comes from an unseen corner and now Emily is a main character too.

Standing by waiting for the next chapter. With the progression of the story, it will need to be a really long chapter.

Really enjoying this so far.

I have been waiting for some days for this latest instalment, and it is well worth the wait. Now I have to wait again. The storyline is interesting, it's sexy and well-written. Many thanks.

I have been totaly vested in this story and I am loving the reads! This is the best chapter by far and I can't wait for Christmas!

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

It's a while since I checked out your stories, but I keep returning to them. I can't make up my mind which series I like the best.

Looking forward to Chapter 10. I can also tell there is a 2009 coming as well. At least I hope so.

I am enjoying this story very much but a little more careful editing would make reading it easier and therefore even more enjoyable.

For example:

"He agreed and we met at Woody's" BUT LATER "We ended the call.".

Just a little point - a shepherd looks after sheep hence the origin of the name. A SHEPHERDS PIE must have sheep meat in it, usually left over roast. If no sheep meat then it is NOT a shepherds pie.

Get it right Johnnymax, he didn't say it was a shepherd's pie, he said his mother called it a shepherd's pie. World of difference.