All Comments on '24 Hours Ch. 05'

Wondering how it got such a high rating when it sucks this bad. My god, people don't talk like that. There was no detail, and it just.. Ugh. It was a horrible attempt. Do us a favor and go kill yourself.

Personally, I enjoyed this story. Now that Sue has written her story, it is most enjoyable to read them both one after the other. Most entertaining! As I said to Sue after her 18th chapter, thanks for sharing this with your readers!

What can I say, I am a romantic at heart and enjoyed the interplay between the characters. Someone else said that people don't talk like that, I have news for him, some do.

Besides which, if this was a true story, it is difficult to remember exactly what was said after a period of time, you generally remember the sense of what was said, instead.

If this was not a true story, then making up dialoge is even harder, which he might know if he ever attempted to write.

As a side note, if Sue ever wrote up her story, I would very much like to know where to find it.

I wish I had more time to read these two series properly. They are fascinating.

OK so some of the dialogue can be a bit hard to follow sometimes. That is not uncommon for me... The many different ways one couple can cum together are so varied that it is just not possible to give sensible detail.

One thing that did give me pause: the discussion of masturbation between 14 year olds. I didn't think that would be allowed, although I know it happens very often. It gives hope in writing Richard's story.

Well written series. Keep it up. Will be looking for Sue's version. :)

so well written, I could picture every moment in my head, and had a throbbing erection to prove it.

This was easily one of the best stories I've read in a long long time! The fact that it's mostly true is really turning on! Came twice reading the whole thing, and rest assured, I will be jacking off to Sue for a while to come! Kudos writer, I'm saving this story for more reads later!

This is truly a very emotional and sexy story. The fact that parts were true only adds to the excitement. BRAVO

Ths is a neat piece of art, nd made me horny, nd must admit, i jacked off many times thinking about Sue's anal, :v

Well can anybody help me find Sue's side of the story??

Too glib.

Lovely story! Will start to read the rest of your stories asap.