All Comments on '24 Hours to Live Ch. 04'

A truly Awesome story with a truly awesome ending

had 24 hours to live and was male, that's exactly how I'd spend it. It's a great vengeful tale and deserves high ratings. Very funny also. You did good.

Danielle

That was great. Hot and amusing, fantastic twist.

He sure knows how to spend his time :D

Wow! Wonderful story, good ending, likeable guy, and Tiffany was HOT.

the storyline was great, and talk about a happy ending, you wrapped it up really well... Millisande

It's very sexy and has a great plotline. The ending was a little too convenient, though. And why would he want to leave town? He has four beautiful women who want him.

Incredible, thank-you very much for taking the time to write this.

What fun! Sometimes vengeance can be rewarding. Why don't any of my enemies have a hot ex-stripper for a wife and lovely virginal daughters. Hell, I'd settle for the readheaded neighbor slut. I rated it a 5, something I reserve for only a few stories. Thanks. Give us more. Maybe follow up story. Can he take over Standish's empire? Or move to London, but trouble finds him there as well.

If I was looking for a good story I would have bought a damn book! I come here looking for a watered-down rush, and here I get the Viagra of literature! I mean, jeez, people these days.

Good story, mate.

Your giving literature back it's good name!

And expanding it's horizons!

Gahaha. Highfive. Highscore. High expectations. Keep it up!

Cool, exciting stories. Makes you wonder what type of twisted things a person would do if they had 24 hours left...

Man you should add to this story, seriously. the way you left it hanging was like a cliffhanger. HEHE but wonderful story i enjoy it very much.

Really good story, well written although I did find it a little unbelievable how tiffany goes from complete innocent, non-responsive virgin to "being a little slut" - just slightly unbelievable?

Mate, this was brilliantly written, all of it.

Good job.

dead man fucking.....excellento.

I don't know if any of the other girls have ever been raped, but I have and trust me as much as you don't like what's going on you end up cumming anyway. The guilt in rape is the orgasm. Tiffany's reactions were completely normal, as were the other two girls'. Excellent story. Ever think of doing a daddy/daughter story? Those are my favorite, especially when it's the daddy being bad and making it the daughter's fault :-)

Oh my.............at this very moment I am typing with sticky keys. Mmmmmmmmm

This is easily my favorite series on Literotica. You made a well crafted story with a great plot line that I particularly appreciated as it went through one of my oldest fantasies.

It was such a good experience reading this, thank you.

i really enjoy reading longer series that develop characters well, and you have the potential to do that with this story, and with your writing skills. Besides everyone loves a story with multiple girls all chasing one guy, dont they? Even if you don't make a long sequel a 4 part story would be adequate. I hope you take this into consideration. :)

Can't Beat Luck! Soo Many Women And New Position - Cock Of The Walk! Great Story!

A million thanks