All Comments on '2B or Not 2B'

And nicely written. For some of us, infatuation at 25 still looks like young love, and ain't young love grand?

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He needs to fill her pussy with his seed. She should quit the pill and begin working on developing a black baby bump

That was nice. We are going to need you to continue this story now. :)

Welcome back! Great job. Know this was a one off story, but I really fell for both the main characters.

I appreciate your writing! It was a fun, romantic read.

Every now and then I find a writer worth reading. Stories about Sex are empty reading if there isn't a human element to them. Most a lacking this. This one is not.

Thanks.

I could have liked if your first stories were longer. As others have said you write about passion, and romance. I also don't just want sexy stories. The emotional feelings are as important as the physical for me. You end your stories pretty nicely on a hopeful note which I appreciate. I can find stories with blackmail and non consent in the tags if I want (I don't). Keep leaving me wanting more!

I’d love to see their relationship develop.

I thought it had really good bones for a first chapter. It would have been a solid storyline if you had wanted to continue on with more chapters ! Hope you , or some other contribution would continue this story through more chapters, please consider!

Expressed your fantasy so eloquently and poetic artistic talent evident. Lasagna my fiance's food intriguing lure along with pineapple upside down cake.