All Comments on '3 Families Vol. 02 Ch. 01'

Thanks for the writing! This was a great start to your new volume. I think your writing has improved, not that it was abysmal before but it just seemed better. I also enjoyed what seemed to be more to read than your earlier chapters. Thanks again!

This was a great story. It was well written, your sentences actually made sense, unlike so many other writers on this site. And don't get me started on other sites. Pathetic! No, this was good, with a plot, backdrop, and character development. I hate that whole rushed into it, let's all get naked format. But I do have one question: you do, eventually, plan to have sex in this sex story don't you?

You're a great story teller but this could have been better if you had had an editor to straighten out some of the English and typos.

Nothing wrong with a little family luvin.

How long does it take to set the story

The time jumps are becoming really annoying!!

As previously stated, I like the series. I like character development. I like logical plot/subplot development. This author is doing both; however, time phasing does not lead to logical development. For ease of assimilation, the brain more easily accepts chronological character plot/subplot development. Still a 5-star series. NOTE: Contrary to popular belief, sexual contact does not have to happen in every chapter. Some people like reading real stories.