All Comments on '3 Families Vol. 03 Ch. 02'

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cj1958cj1958over 8 years ago

I hope there will be at least 1 more chapter to this story it has been very good reading . a little hard to keep up with but good.

RicoLouisRicoLouisover 8 years agoAuthor
One more to come

Yes there will be at least one more to finish up the story which I am working on now. It will finish the story, at least until the 2020's.

pravzypravzyover 8 years ago

I have been a faithful follower of your story and have enjoyed it.. But this part was not upto your level of expertise..i felt like you did not invest too much in this chapter..

RicoLouisRicoLouisover 8 years agoAuthor

There was going to be more but decided to save it for the third chapter as to not give away some things that will happen in the third. Plus most of it i wrote when I was not at my best. I had planned for it to end the story but decided to split up the cousins and sisters parts in two and expand the third.

Tygerlove69Tygerlove69over 8 years ago
Melancholy

I have been withe this series since the installment of vol 2 and I am sad to see it end... with that I say that you grand Teton and beachbum1958 are my favorite authors in this site

VlandisVlandisover 8 years ago
Wonderful

It's funny, This story(or a version of it) is actually the story that led me to finding this website. I originally read your work on the "choose your own" site and a few of your other, it eventually lead me here. I must say I'm glad you've decided to put it down into an actual story format, although I'll always like Penny the best. Seeing those slips that got past editing is cool as well, a little "I know that reference" moment. Hope you continue coming out with creative works! You're very good at making interwoven stories without it seeming to be bogged down with to many characters

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
wonderful as always

Hey man just provide the date on which next chapter will be coming

So i don't have to go &check it in every 2-3 days.hope you provide the date.

RicoLouisRicoLouisover 8 years agoAuthor
next week maybe

the editor has the next chapter now, so hopefully early next week.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 2 years ago

Events in the story reflect life. Unfortunately, life is not as beautiful as the story nor the characters in it.

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