All Comments on '4 Scarves, a Blindfold and a Bullet Pt. 01'

I read the title and was expecting to make a comment about the idiocy of 'gun play.' SMH, too much crazy stuff gets posted. Realizing it was the other kind of bullet, I was able to enjoy the ride. Second person is often stilted and not erotic. You did a nice job here. Your descriptions are sexy. Lack of dialogue usually hurts a story, again, not here. You made it work. There's a lot packed into this short scene. I really, really, REALLY liked that you didn't depend on the overworked bitch/slut/whore crap or include humiliation. I hope both of those choices stay with you for future chapters. Looking forward to more.

Love the beginning of this story, fabulous writing and Maria is a very lucky lady, more please

I also miss you and I think of you often but it’s all for the best if only things could have stayed the same. I really am sorry but you still have my heart.

We are safe for now, I truly hope you and your family are too x stay safe