All Comments on ''57' Ch. 01'

Creepy but good. Though the jury's still out if this is the good kind of creepy or the bad kind.

Reminds me of a movie I saw a while ago, a British film, about human clones raised and reared to be organ donors...that was not a good kind of creepy!

I like the start but not sure how it's going to end. Whether there'll be a twist or just a straightforward bdsm tale doesn't matter as long as it's readible. Quite original and I've already grown to like the main character.

More please. It's a five for me.

It’s an interesting attempt at avoiding the kidnap and brainwashing aspect of this type of story. By creating a clone of a person, is she still a person with rights, needs and feelings or is she actually a non person because she was created not born. I’d say she is still a person entitled to all those things, after all she’s biologically the same and has the same memories.

Still a technological marvel, of course it doesn’t explain why The Corp would spend millions to achieve the goal of sex slaves and then feed her junk food *facepalm*

As I read the first few paragraphs my initial thoughts were, "Here we go again The Stepford Wives revisited!" Now that I have finished chapter 1, I am delighted to say, "I'm hooked!" I can't wait to see how the storyline and characters are developed. The potential is sooooo much greater than the rather robotic movie i made reference.