by FinishTheDamnStory
...this is going towards reconciliation?
It seems like the dumb-slut is giving Damon all the other firsts she can think of to try and make up for her conniving ways earlier. I'm interested to read how this ends.
Does the man-whore (which he's become in this) stops thinking with the little head and watches some of the spy-camera feeds. Which of the girls he ends up with, etc. Sign of a good story in my book.
"this is going towards reconciliation", but there's a twist around every corner!
Whichever way it goes, I know that I'm going to enjoy it - I just wish it was more than 8 days - Great story.
I liked it! Obviously, took a lot of thought. Thank you
Fun stuff, lotsa detail.... i have one beef ... No french maid outfit or slutty stewardess costume she coulda worn to blow him during dinner?? Lacey still wants him back afterall.
Just love (yes, that's sarcasm) assholes who can't stand people having a different opinion.
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Ya like the story? Fine. Slamming others for not liking the story. Not fine. In fact, it's asinine.
And, though a very sexy story and keeping true to the characters, this suddenly smelled of reconciliation.
And I thought of all she said, the vindictiveness of her words only a few short days before, and I knew. Please, just kill her and let him grieve over her grave? Or, maybe let him hook up with her mom, to do something absolutely unforgivable in her eyes. Because, she was way colder than frozen, and way meaner than hating only days before. Trust is paramount...
5*'s again FTDS!
- Thabes
She's trying very hard, sounding sincere, and almost has me convinced. Waiting for the other shoe to drop. He did get the house wired for surveillance, right?
All these others have too much baggage or other lying and cheating problems. And not a chance that he should go with Lacey, better to lay off sex. What a lying bitch, now working hard to make things right!
looking for a Libra to complete the rhyme. TK U MLJ LV NV
"But we didn't know! None of us did. How could we?" – So what? So what if he WASN’T some stud in the sack? How would that still excuse her slutting around? And, AGAIN, Jenna was 1) never really part of the deal, and 2) Lacey broke the deal by giving Brett her virgin ass.
And I'm pretty sure I'm repeating myself here, but I'm still no buying that "misunderstanding" about giving him her VIRGIN ass on their honeymoon. She was QUITE explicit about giving him her - virgin - ass! As I said earlier, it all could have been avoided if she simply gave him her ass right then, to seal the deal.
You have done an admirable job of bring this gal down the road to redemption.
But at odds with Lacey's attitude.
A woman stupid enough to do what she did seems at odds with the woman being portrayed here.
Raised last couple of chapters from 3 stars to 4
She's earning him back. Look back in 50 years and their lives will have been perfect.
Spot on....excuses and bullshit. Period. Virgin ass means exactly that, lawyering be damned. And Damon never consented to the "no Jenna" rule, which may or may not have happened without Lacey breaking her end of the bargain. And why is there no real accountability for the Lacey pressure for ladies to leave Damon alone in breach of the pact? It's clear that she only wanted to have her fun during those eight days and keep Damon chastely on the shelf. To say nothing about her trash talk with Brett about her "cucky fiancee."
Truth be told, these don't sound like ideas that Lacey would come up with on her own, so I think that her friends, the very friends now chomping at the bit to bed Damon and console him, were feeding her cuckold fantasies, for whatever reason escapes me. Yeah, I'm pretty sure that there was some stuff behind the scenes where Stacy, Donna, and Vicky encouraged her to do this. Which makes you wonder about their own relationships, right? Maybe not as faithful as they expect their men to be.
He (rightly) calls hers a slut, but he's no better himself. He's the biggest man-whore since Casanova. This bunch probably have so many STD's passing between them, that the sexual health clinic must have their photos hanging on the wall at the reception, as a warning to humanity.
Set up I think. How did Jenna know the stripers name? Interesting story liking it so far
"But we didn't know! None of us did. How could we?" – So what? So what if he WASN’T some stud in the sack? How would that still excuse her slutting around? And, AGAIN, Jenna was 1) never really part of the deal, and 2) Lacey broke the deal by giving Brett her virgin ass.
And I'm pretty sure I'm repeating myself here, but I'm still no buying that "misunderstanding" about giving him her VIRGIN ass on their honeymoon. She was QUITE explicit about giving him her - virgin - ass! As I said earlier, it all could have been avoided if she simply gave him her ass right then, to seal the deal.
SevMax2
SevMax2over 1 year ago
I seldom agree with sbrooks about much, but here he's dead right.
Spot on....excuses and bullshit. Period. Virgin ass means exactly that, lawyering be damned. And Damon never consented to the "no Jenna" rule, which may or may not have happened without Lacey breaking her end of the bargain. And why is there no real accountability for the Lacey pressure for ladies to leave Damon alone in breach of the pact? It's clear that she only wanted to have her fun during those eight days and keep Damon chastely on the shelf. To say nothing about her trash talk with Brett about her "cucky fiancee."
Truth be told, these don't sound like ideas that Lacey would come up with on her own, so I think that her friends, the very friends now chomping at the bit to bed Damon and console him, were feeding her cuckold fantasies, for whatever reason escapes me. Yeah, I'm pretty sure that there was some stuff behind the scenes where Stacy, Donna, and Vicky encouraged her to do this. Which makes you wonder about their own relationships, right? Maybe not as faithful as they expect their men to be.
I have to agree with both of these two commenters, in that Lacey didn't keep up her end of the deal by giving her VIRGIN ass to Damon, as Brett got it instead. I believe that yes, Lacey really wanted to slut around on Damon. If she really didn't want to get caught being with Brett, she should have gotten a hotel/motel for the night(s) that way she'd have the privacy she wanted without the chance of being caught. But then, since she had already set up first night with Brett, what would have happened if Damon had said no to the 8 days of being single? Would she have cheated then? This seems to be the question everyone is dancing around in the story. Lacey added the "allowing him to have her VIRGIN ass" as an inducement to going along with "the deal". If he had said No, what would she do then? Offer to have her friends join them in a 3some? It sure sounded like it was near being on the table. Didn't matter though as she couldn't keep her end of "the deal". While this chapter seemed to calm down some between Lacey and Damon, it sure seems like she's trying to seduce him back, now that she knows they're done. Not to mention the one thing that was supposed to happen... that he wasn't supposed to fuck her friends (people they know, that wasn't spelled out in the deal). Of course Lacey had already put out the word that no friends of hers were to have sex with him, and the same applied to any of the gym friends too. Now Damon has had all but Vicky in bed at least once, with Stacy being multiple times (couch and a bed). So how is that any different than him doing Jenna? At least Damon got Nikki's virgin ass out of all of it. :-)
No matter how many firsts, it didn't matter anymore. What mattered was already given away to someone who didn't mattered.