All Comments on '8 Hours'

by OnlyByMoonlight

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fridayamfridayamover 14 years ago
Wow and Ow

That is a beautifully constructed story, OBM--your best so far, I think. The pain in it is both beautifully distilled and artfully hidden. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What a sad, poignant story!

I'm so glad that I took the time to read this even though I cried. So sad but so full of love and so very true. Nothing hurts worse than the loss of a child, no matter how long that child was with you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Damn!

My room is really dusty. This dust is making my eyes water.

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Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
WOW...

simple great,,,,

jiminabjiminababout 14 years ago
Sad

The story was sad at the start then became even worse once I realised who died. Lots of tears. Very well done and I pray that this is fiction.

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 14 years ago
Painful Poignant

So sad. Very nicely written.

calibeachgirlcalibeachgirlalmost 12 years ago
what a

truly sad, wonderful story

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