All Comments on 'A Babysitter Gets Control'

Really enjoyed your story. I think it would be great for you to carry on with the characters of Pam and Lori.

Dawn that was without doubt THE most erotic story I have ever read.

It had all that is needed in a erotic story and keeps you wanting more.

Please please pick up your pen and give us more fantastic stories just like that.......Thank You

Part two, please.

Please add many chapters and new stories soon, very soon.

Misty

That was the most disgusting , despicable story I have ever read.......... could you please write some more?? thank You :)

This would be great for more chapters. Love the suspense. More please ↕ ♥

Just loved it....Hope to see more....Keep up your great work!!!

great story; it was well written and scorching hot :)

This story needs more parts and keep up the great work.

OMG. I kept thinking that my wife, Anne, should have a babysitter like that. But we don't have a baby as an excuse to call our neighbor's girl in to be with Anne when I am on a trip. Our neighbors have a girl, Nina, who is 19 or 20, tall and athletic. She plays basketball. Not very pretty, but I could see her being dominant over Anne. Your story makes me want it to happen. I can only wish!

Definitely needs more chapters. Maybe Lori takes over and controls the twins.

Another fantastic story from the best writer on literotica. Please do another chapter.

Love this story would like to see more of the three together

P for a pair of Asshole perverts.

what happened to the Baby while this is all going on

Sorry a bit too far fetched for me!

What an outstanding story. I know it’s been a while, and you probably won’t write more but I want you to know, I loved reading it. I’m going to investigate and read all the rest of your stories. Thank you very much.

OMG! I loved your very erotic story. Even if the sexual fantasies were somewhat exaggerated; the mind and our imaginations are very erotic. I had just turned 18 years-old one summer when I was befriended and willingly seduced by an older neighbor. Susan was a 36 year-old divorced Nurse I babysat for. I had known her for about a year and we had gone running together, played tennis together, and I had access to use her pool anytime I wanted. She was a 5’ 10” tall blonde, with a model-like body. I was infatuated with her worldliness and perfect body. I found myself making excuses to visit and use her pool and would wear a bikini my Mother would not have approved of. I liked her complimenting my athletic 5’ 7” tall, 125lb., 34C-24-35 young body. Susan accepted me as an adult and I was titillated whenever I saw her in various stages of undress. I enjoyed seeing her come to the door early in the morning; wearing a short satin robe or long t-shirt with no bra underneath. As she began allowing me to see more of her body in various stages of undress; I began wearing more tank tops and short shorts that accentuated my curvy body. My parents were going away on a weeks vacation and provided the opportunity to stay with Susan if I needed to. Your story made me relive that wonderful week of sexual experimentation, which awakened and changed me forever. Susan and I had been sunbathing and swimming in her pool. Her master bedroom was adjacent to the pool. We had spent an afternoon of sunbathing and using tanning lotion on each other’s bodies. Susan walked me to her bedroom and once inside backed me against the patio door; kissing me passionately for the first time. My young body trembled with nervous anticipation; which I had only fantasized about. Our passion couldn’t wait for a shower and our bikinis were shed quickly; our oiled bodies only adding to our mutual stimulation and satisfaction. I was guided by Susan rather than dominated by her. However, she was in control and was pleasantly surprised by my curiosity, enthusiasm, and desire to reciprocate. Gina, 22 years-old, in San Diego. xxx ooo

That was the hottest story I've ever read. Can you do a part 2 where Pam and Paul fuck as well? I don't care how it happens. Whether they are just so horny that they need to or it was dark and he thought he was fucking Lori or whatever. Also can you have the hubby walk in on Lori and Pam and after hearing Pam call his wife her dearest slutty mommy and then have him get turned on and masturbating while secretly watching. Maybe he records to blackmail Pam with. Maybe he comes home early one day when she's babysitting and dominates her and makes her call hum

This is a great story!