All Comments on 'A Backwoods Tale'

Read real novels about people. Rarely are such stereotyped over-the-top caricatures employed, yet a real sense of genuine culture is conveyed. I couldn't get past the second paragraph, it was so stupid.

I know that dangly thing . . .

Give readers a break. You don't know how to write dialect. Stick to what you do know.

Hey I'm from the South. I got my first piece of incest pussy in a stinky outhouse! Good memories!

Your education is showing, "sensitive orb of my cockhead then it made a circular odyssey of discovery around this sphere" from a redneck, I don't think so. But it's still s good story.

Hillbillies have a saying; the closer the kin, the deeper in... I bet honey pussy would taste nice.

You made me cum twice with this story! It was a fun read.. I loved it! Keep on keepin' on!

I agree it wasn't a believable redneck, but it was fun to read. I didn't think I'd get past the first couple paragrapshs, but I kept reading. It kept me laughing so damn hard and before I knew it, I had read the whole thing...good work.

The scorching young sex is very well described indeed. And the redneck context and dialectal language are both funny as hell. Now, are these kids, being profoundly in lust, gonna get hitched so's he can get truly pussy-whipped? Or will each of his sisters get her shot at him as she grows into a sexy young woman? Hmmm! Rating is a solid 5.

The scorching young sex is very well described indeed. And the redneck context and dialectal language are both funny as hell. Now, are these kids, being profoundly in lust, gonna get hitched so's he can get truly pussy-whipped? Or will each of his sisters get her shot at him as she grows into a sexy young woman? Hmmm! Rating is a solid 5.

good but needs more to tell if the mom says any thing and to tell if janir=e gets pregnant and also if they end up sleeping together all the time please continue

Outstanding, Please write another chapter to this episode. I found it to be very erotic but it need to go beyond it's ending.

the mom should tell janie that the other kids need more room so she will be moving into her brothers room and sleeping there from now on and maybe a pregnancy would be nice also

The redneck inflection just made me shake my head thinking how silly it was... It was an ok story.

I could not help but to laugh at some of the things that happened. The funniest was the birthday boy thinking he was pussywhipped!

i read this on another site and it was longer there i hope you didn't steal this

To the commenter below; yes, I did indeed 'steal' this from another site! Actually, I stole from StoriesXNXX.com and I stole from myself who writes these stories there with YOUNGER characters. I use the name; JackassTales!

One of my favourite films is 'Next of Kin', starring Patrick Swayze and Liam Neeson. The film concerns two hillbilly brothers seekin revenge/justice for the murder of a younger brother. The film does not portray hillbillies as ignorant or uncivilised and the tone and language used in this story serves a similar purpose. The narrator uses his skill to define the way in which the characters communicate, but his spelling and grammar shows that it is his intent just to create the hillbilly atmosphere. It works. Great story. I almost wish we had hillbillies in Britain.

EXCELLENT story, well told with imagination and humour. It had my cock hard from start to finish, and had me wishing I had a sister.

I've fucked a second cousin but it wasn't the same because we saw each other so rarely it was like fucking a stranger.

I saw my Mom's cunt lots of times because my family were nudists, but I never had the nerve to try anything.

Now I wish I had.

Great story, I loved the bit of humor in it, one thing though, don't be calling hill folk rednecks there is a difference between a redneck's and hillbilly's.

Southern boys= rednecks

from the hills= hilbilly's

Of course the mother knew what was going on.Female intuition and remembering her own coming of age..She probably lost her virginity to one of her brothers in similar circumstances..As the younger girls comes of age,she will send them out with their brother to fetch wood/honey/water..A family tradition...On the whole a well written story..Good atmosphere and very erotic...Keep up the good work.

i was rock hard throughout the entire thing

Funny, very visual, almost cartoonish, exaggeratedly ironic, and played to just about everybackwoods/hill-billy/redneck/Deliverance/Southern Comfort cliche in the book - absolute bloody genius!

Busting his kid sister's cherry is part of a big brother's job description. I like the comment of the reader who wrote "wonderful." The guy saw his own mother's cunt plenty of times in his nudist family (lucky bastard). Now he wishes he'd stuck his cock right up inside it. Entirely understandable. Nothing can ever feel as cozy and comfy, as so totally warm and loving, so fucking right, to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt. The boy aches to give his beloved mom the best gift he knows, a huge torrent of his warm creamy semen from his hot young balls. Well, wannabe (and actual) motherfuckers can at least read about it on this great site.

This made my pussy so wet and i am horney as fuck right now i would never fuck my brother but i would fuck my cousin he is so hot and muscular i would enjoy sucking him dry and him thrusting his cock inside of me it feels good just thinking about it but I'm still a virgin but i am 14 years old. and i don't want anyone complaining that I'm too young to be on this cite because i watch porn and I've seen a dick before so shut up and don't start nothing anyways i liked the story and it made me horney and wet i love reading incent stories their my favorite

He is fucining Janie, let him knock her up, and have mom say how unfair it is not to be lovin his other sisters in the same way, that he should obey the law of the hills and fuck them to, and find out that ma and pa ain't rightfully married cause they be brother and sister obeying the law of the hills, he can even fuck ma after the new baby is born and breastfeed from her tits

Go fuck your white ass you redneck lowlife cunts. Family dig fuckers.

You are right in your introduction. The exaggerated dialekt is distracting. I was born and grew up in those mountains. My Pa made 'Shine' and Ma made babies. By the way, being a 'Moonshiner' isn't for the lazy. Anyway, as ignorant as I am I can spell and my 18yr old sister never was dumb enough not to know that creamy stuff came out of my Peter. We saw enough Bulls covering Cows not to know what happened. And we ALL saw what Pa did with Ma, living on top of each other like we done. But we, me and sis, gave each other what we want most whenever. Meaning each other. We learned what each other felt and looked like real young, which was a kind of innocent incest as we were about six. By the way, this was a really dumb place to put a story about sex. Nobody in our mountains ever had a 2-holer, and that isn't any place you want to get a blow job no matter how bad you want one. It stinks bad and theres spiders and its dark and either hot or cold. A better place woulda been at the swim hole or while tending to Pa's still. Theres no problem with a place for Brother and Sister to do their thing. Most every family I know has a Pickup or Car with grass grown up around it in the backyard and a big Propane tank to hide behind. Not that they'd need to hide for long. It doesn't take long for everybody on the mountain to know everybody els'es business. Even folks we've never met, we know who they spend the nights with. As the saying goes in our part of the country, "when the sun goes down, you can hear the footsteps crunchin' the gravel on the road". Everybody is visiting somebody elses wife or sister!

Common. I'm a redneck in Tennessee and I wouldn't even think about doing it in an outhouse.

While he had his young hard cock deep in her belly, I thought Pa may amble along with his big cock dangling out of his jeans and at least get her to suck it. Perhaps in the future she will accompany her brother and father into the woods and come home with both their seeds in her belly. If Ma knows she took the stud, you can bet Pa can smell her having taken brothers cock.

And it occurs to me she may be bred and carrying their first child. I can't help but wonder what the internal view of her pussy would look with him pumping and then shooting his seed deep into his sister. As for the incest aspects; many sisters have entertained their brothers' and/or fathers' cocks. That may or may not be "right", but it is just human nature. Hope there are more chapters to this story. It is well written and enjoyable. Just ignore the negative comments as I bet those guys jerked off to your writing!

Hope future installments describe their bodies and how they looked as he mounted and fucked her. Like how his ass looks (hopefully hairy) and how slender and muscular it is as he humps and then plants his seed. And what his cock looks like; we have a good description of her pussy.

by someone pretending to be from the backwoods. Too much effort was used to create words that someone from the backwoods wouldn't be using.

Sadly there are many people whose families lack the financial ability to enable their children to acquire the proper education. In addition, as those areas often lack sufficient funding to employ the educators that would teach the children the proper use of the English language, and to motivate them in that regard.

Ridiculing them for something they have no control over is childish.

I loved the hillbilly background story. I did find it annoying that you continuously kept referring to his sister as "that gal". It would make for better reading to simply say "my sister" or her name.