All Comments on 'A Battle of Minds Ch. 06'

An excellent and imaginative series

that was great! i was thoroughly happy with that happy ending! omg! i couldnt believe how unhappy it started and then to come to this! awwww BRAVO has to be one of my top favs now!

You're writing in a somewhat staid and formal style for this story. I'm liking it. Structurally, the story stays sound, with good elements, plot lines, details, and story arc. Congratulations and thank you for work well done. I would classify this as having a solid story with enough adult content, required by the plot, to make it less publishable by standard outlets. I found only one typo, so you're good there, too. Very nice effort.

If you post an anonymous Paypal account (create a hotmail / gmail account with no tie-in to your real name) you can accept donations for such efforts. I'd like to send you $3 or so, but have no way to do this.

Keep writing, I like your stuff!

A wonderful ending to a perfect story

I only read the last two chapters but the writing’s amazing. You should write books 👍

Good story. Not gonna lie, I sorta expected an ending like this. But it was still very good.