by bluedragonauthor
fun rollercoaster, donno if ill be able to handle 5 more, but im sure gonna try!
Although this wasn't your hottest story, I feel it is one of your more mature ones. I enjoyed it a great deal.
In the first few stories of the series, I felt that John as a character, while being a nice guy, lacked the sort of depth you give him in this new series. There wasn't much that set the protagonist of this series apart from the other protagonists in your other series - they seemed very interchangeable.
However, with this story you managed to add much more depth and interest your protagonist and you draw out his character very well with the conflicting emotions. I look forward to the rest of the series.
Really good stuff! I wasn't sure whether it would work out as the first set of John Billionaire had a similar thing with Cassandra, but it did! Really hot writing!
Hurray to the world for giving us Blue Dragon Author - I will never tire of reading his work. Keep it up! More, more, more! Author! Author!
Simply incredible,the emphasis on characters is really something to be proud of.Never lost interest anywhere in the middle.Please Keep writing more.Its a request.
You have managed to turn this guy into a selfish prick.
I mean he "loves" all of these women right? He expects them to jump and bend to his every whim.
give me a break
I'm glad Brittany is dealt with he was too rough on her. Also a great conflict with John and Cassandra that is neatly resolved. Good job
Such a great series. I have read all the way up thru ch.2 of this arc in only three days. My cock is so sore.
I had never liked her throughout the stories and did not trust her. Changed my mind, now. She has proved herself. (Yes, I know it's just a story.) The sex scenes are all hot, very hot.
I think everything that nwnnguy said is completely true for me as well. Hell, my entire body was sore today, and the only serious exercise I had last weekend was these stories! ;)
You are a great writer, both in the person of your characters and in the sheer eroticism of your scenes. Amazing!
Riches does not equal wisdom. Jonathan was a dick for how he treated Cassandra and Brittany (though I think she led him on). But eventually he figured it out.
I know how this story ends, but maybe Jonathan needs to commit exclusively to one woman for sex and stop munching his way around like Pac-Man (the video game, not the boxer.)
Excellent writing!
This is a really good story, but when is he going to get Taylor and cassandra pregnant. They each need to have a baby to cement everything.