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58mg58mg4 months ago

Needs a part 2

CiaoSteveCiaoSteve4 months agoAuthor

58mg . . . don't worry, it's in the plan to make this snippet into a full blown story

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Utterly predictable

LivelinessLiveliness3 months ago

I enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to part Ii.

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum3 months ago

Clever switch of dom roles.

OverLookerKingOverLookerKing3 months ago

Good short story - really leave a lot left open for the story to go -

OverLookerKingOverLookerKing3 months ago

I was just looking through your other stories - wish there had been a part 2 for this story.

CiaoSteveCiaoSteve3 months agoAuthor

@overlookerking . . . this one will become a fully fledged story once I get the time, so don't worry

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