All Comments on 'A Bit of Unexpected Joy'

by Marigny

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Amisit__ScintillaAmisit__Scintillaabout 4 years ago
thank you

really enjoyed reading that. please write more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

This was very, very well written - the dialog was superb - although it might feel a little rushed that they got so intimate already on their first evening (accidentally) together in the nude.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Well Done!

I love the playful and sexy banter. Another nice bit was once they were intimate, the son did not immediately take over and become a controlling cockbite and do something out of character (like order her around or choke/fuck her mouth). Thank you for not going there. Please write more!

Valekjames83Valekjames83about 4 years ago
Great story!

Hope you continue with more chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Interesting and fun

Many families have had to make some adjustments,especially those living in small homes apartments. Although not prancing around naked there are lapses in dress code and personal behavior occurring.Quite a few are going with the flow and making the best of a bad situation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fun read

I enjoyed the humor. I even laughed out load a few times. Great story!

blaster666blaster666about 4 years ago
excellant story

A truly wonderful tale. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very Well Done!

Well written... enjoyed the humor and the banter between the characters. Look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Wonderful

Wondering how many families will dip their toe....

bipaddlerbipaddlerover 3 years ago
Excellent story!

Well written, just as long as it needed to be, likable characters. Love the banter and ribbing between the two, and the open ending. More of the same please!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved it, especially the snappy dialogue

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Excellent story. I could wish for more, but I get it. Thanks for sharing

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