by Marigny
This was very, very well written - the dialog was superb - although it might feel a little rushed that they got so intimate already on their first evening (accidentally) together in the nude.
I love the playful and sexy banter. Another nice bit was once they were intimate, the son did not immediately take over and become a controlling cockbite and do something out of character (like order her around or choke/fuck her mouth). Thank you for not going there. Please write more!
Many families have had to make some adjustments,especially those living in small homes apartments. Although not prancing around naked there are lapses in dress code and personal behavior occurring.Quite a few are going with the flow and making the best of a bad situation.
I enjoyed the humor. I even laughed out load a few times. Great story!
Well written... enjoyed the humor and the banter between the characters. Look forward to reading more of your work.
Well written, just as long as it needed to be, likable characters. Love the banter and ribbing between the two, and the open ending. More of the same please!