All Comments on 'A Blackmailling Bitch'

Jenny was a master in putting this together. She wasted no expense in getting a great place to fuck Susan in the ass, yet she saved the pussy for her father Ken. DarkCloud it would be fun to see a second chapter to see how this would play out :).

I realized this is fiction, so what I say is fiction also. The stroy did have a different ending, but someone shoud KILL Jenny very slowly. Make her beg to be killed and then leave her to die a lonely and hollow death.

However, Jenny shouldn't get off that easy.

you are one sick and demented child in turning your anger onto women when you suffer from a fetish or psychopathy of humiliation.

honestly run and get ALOT of help before this eats your soul.

there is nothing worse than a guy trying to write as a woman.

finally an erotic tale with a great twist ending, bravo! sequel!

I agree with (SAD) and with (Please see the SAD!!! comment) add another chapter and let the dad and Susan get even with that Office Bitch.........PLEASE

Paul

I did not see that twist coming, truly you must have a sick and twisted mind! I would love to read what happened once Jenny left with Susan tied to the bed awaiting Ken.

I think that jenny need her comuppence and i think that susan and her dad should pay jenny back for her deviousness

sequel!

oh ur great this should be a book and a movie really i give u two thumbs up!!!!!

If you have this kind of imagination you should really write a book because this was crazy. I enjoyed it really..

Love it and am looking forward to more stories like this from you. So depravet and titilating. Yessssss.....

unless I've misunderestimated the dictionary, that's not a word. heh heh.

she just has to get her Dad to come to the hotel too and hear the first 2 minutes of dialogue (with a walkie talkie or so) and she doesn't have to do a thing with Julie. Please, if you make blackmailing stories don't make it trivial to get out of it. It destroys the story.

Come on now, wheres the rest of the story :-)~

Oh god. That ending made me sick.

I loved it!

That was damn good!A great story and twist,just a few spelling errors but otherwise a winner.

Susan's legs werent tied right? She could just cross them and try to get out of incest

Excellent story. Very original, well-structured with a sublime twist at the end. Well done!

Who ruined your joy? This is an AWfUL story! Gawd. How could you even THINK such creepy things? You told your story of depravity well, though: so U R not an idiot, just sick & wrong!

Oh well, so much 4 tender lesbian LOVE-making I suppose. Heh

Im going 2 go vomit, now, OK?

U Sick FUCK!

That was really really good one of the hottest stories I've read on here.

Ok so jenny told ken that she would be waitin for him tied to the bed. gagged. ok. so how many of you out there can tie your wrist and ankles to the bed by yourself? i can see gagging yourself beforehand. but if i was ken i would have asked jenny who is helping tie her to the bed. duh!

My Advice to you is keep pushing the boundaries of writing. I just Loved it! Please keep up the good work!

GENIUS I LUV IT

So intense! I hope you keep writing for sure.

Wow. What a great story. Definitely the best I've read on literotica. The twist ending made it great. But you have to write a sequel. I want to know what happens when Ken gets there and then the aftermath. Once again, great story.

That was great!you absolutely have towrite a sequel!!! Wonderful twist ending she is EVIL!!!!!!!

Dude thats messed up tricking her dad to have sex eith his own daughter.

please could you write a sequel for this

Please write a sequel for this, it's amazing!!

Having her tied up like that for her father to do her, Brilliant.....

Pls write more...

It would be nice to have a father daughter romance. The happy couple shows their gratitude to Jenny by inviting her on their “honeymoon trip", training her to be their personal servant with lifetime job security.

all i can say is dam

That was Fantastic. You need to write another one though I want to hear all about Ken and Susan and what happened when he got there

I loved that story. I can't wait for a part two on it. Will there be one?

i love it, please continue this story, would love to see what happen next morning when her dad wakes up and sees her daughter and what jenny does with the video she recorded

That's the end? Seriously that’s the end?

It’s an interesting story and could be good if it were finished. I don’t really understand the reason for posting incomplete stories and abandoning them. At least mark them unfinished and inactive so people know and don’t bother reading.

please continue this

AMAZING idea at the end

But why u no finish?

Terrific concept. I'd LOVE to read a detailed description of Susan's ravishing by her father and, then, Susan's revenge on Jenny. Maybe after a few more dates with Jenny, Susan could be tuned into a willing lesbian slave?

I read this story ages ago and have been looking for it. I remembered the basic plot bout couldn't figure out the rest so it has alluded me until I stumbled upon it again.

A very well written and great story with a twist. Top notch.

Love that to continue on.

With a capital B!

Such a devious woman, just when you think it's over... Very interesting story, I can only imagine how that will affect Susan's relationship with her father...maybe it can be explored in a follow up story? Thank you for sharing your vision and talent.

What a shitty story with no good lesbian scenes. Was waiting until the end for nothing.

And you end it with an incest twist, bravo I guess dumbass. As derenged as others from this site.