All Comments on 'A Bottoms Seduction Ch. 05'

by TwistedManc

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MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer3 months ago

Wow, I not sure which was hotter, the teasing or actually doing the deed. Or maybe it was the combination, but this was HOT! I don't know if Carl had an ulterior motive in going after Martin originally or not but even if he had it now looks like he's fallen for Martin. And though Martin was able to assert a bit of sexual dominance over Carl in this chapter, it's still pretty clear that Carl is a power that Martin has no control over. Can't wait to find out how this all turns out.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

How is it possible that this story gets better and better each chapter?? This seduction is perfect and feels so real. I wish I had my own Carl at work! Can’t wait to see what comes next. I still think it would be very hot if after this encounter he begins to notice other men carls age as well ;)

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I'm so happy you updated, I've been checking the website everyday waiting for a new chapter!

They are so hot and cute together and they're making so much progress, please let them have the happy ending they deserve, don't break Carl's little heart

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Fantastic!!! Truly worth the wait!! Thank you

Rimbaud17Rimbaud173 months ago

Absolutely outstanding.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Loved this story. You are an amazing writer. Thanks for sharing with us

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

The act was Martin’s dominance, mounting and cumming in Carl’s ass, but they both know who’s actually in charge now. It’s what Martin wanted. He’s probably jerked off dreaming of being trapped in Carl’s boipussy and cumming so hard. And now it’s happened.

JT

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Can’t wait for part 6.

FinucklechizFinucklechiz3 months ago

Lezz gooo for part 6!!!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please update soon! This is your best story no doubt

AmbulAmbul3 months ago

Love it! Martin will not give up the fabulous sex with Carl, and at some point will have to tell his wife. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

This is amazing. I love what Carl is doing. Teasing Daddy Martin all day. I hope you can turn my fantasy into reality as a birthday gift for March first. I hope you can show some fetishes specifically shoes, socks, and feet fetish which Carl have and will eventually worship Martin’s feet before sex and after work which will take our Daddy by surprise. I also hope, there will be a jealousy part on Carl’s side where another boy would hit on our daddy Martin but he wont betray Carl ofcourse. It will just be a tease like to spice things up. Looking forward to Chapter 6. And to the anonymous daddy who said he wish he have a Carl at the office, I want to be that Carl. 🥵

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Please make them fall in love!!

I want a happy ending for them.

Love this story series, thank you :)

Kate xxx

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Carl needs to start wearing his wifes panties

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

So very hot! Would love to see more of them together!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Hey please update soon! I miss them :(

cdCindy1cdCindy1about 2 months ago

Martin needs to suck Carl's cock soon. I myself am like Carl -- I'm an avid cocksucking faggot bottom. I love love love cock.

I'm looking forward to reading how this story goes.

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