All Comments on 'A Boy's Last Summer'

God, I love a good plot in a hot story.

Well done! A lovely May/December love story! Thank you for sharing this with us!

Good good good.. Really good! I scored it a 5.

All the extra characters were blended in perfectly.

The phobias were added in masterfully.

The only thing i wonder about is if would have been better if david was a virgin with only having heather jacking him off twice but her demanding he eat her young gash on every date they had. I would have loved for sexy desirable older roxy to take his virginity.

I have a feeling i will be reading this again soon.

You have my vote for the win.

Love the characters and the whole flow. You managed to keep it short and still feel complete enough for full enjoyment, but I would have welcomed a much longer and fully developed plot as well. Thanks for sharing your talents.

u wrote it perfect thx

Wow, what a terrific story - really good. Top marks!

I agree with cindylynn34. I would liked it better if Roxy had taken his virginity!! I also give it a 5 star!

Amazing love story, captivating the love between Roxy and David.

Five star. Lovely it

I'd love to see how these two make out...I don't know if you planned on it but this story needs a conclusion...

Thanks for the positive feedback. It’s what keeps me writing.

Loved it! The buildup to the sex was just perfect. The scene descriptions were so detailed it was like the reader was a fly on the wall. Five stars and a favorite point!

Well done. On every count

Was this set back in the 50s?

i will read more of your work ... well written and thoroughly enjoyable

Well written

Thank you for sharing another one of your enjoyable stories! Certainly, this is the winning story!

... of the rest of your writing, you will quickly end up on top of my favorite authors list. Exceptionally well done! Thank you!

I would love to see where this story goes. Would love a part 2!!!!

Well developed story line and just the right balance between the young guy coming of age and the attractive woman accepting the changes to her life

Wave World sounds a lot like Big Surf and the power plant sounds a lot like Palo Verde. A well written and lovely story. I enjoyed it very much.

A really good story, I enjoyed it. Well paced too. 5 Stars all the way. By the way; UltimateHomeBody, what makes you think that this story was set in the 50s???

A thoroughly enjoyable story. Thank you.

Very well written story. The characters were developed with sufficient detail that they were easily identified with. One of the best written presentations I’ve read on this site. Keep up the good work.

It was a little drawn out but that added to the excitement. My dick was up and down so many times in anticipation. Made for a lot of pre cum and a nice load at the end. 2 thumbs up.

This is a very moving and loving story. David and Roxy truly fall into love in a most unexpected way -- almost as if the powers above had so directed things. How can you not love David's maturity, not only the hairy chest and abs and sizable cock, but also his attitude and character. This is a maturity beyond his years -- Mrs. Foester called it more a man than a boy..

I imagine his friends (and Mrs. Foster) seeing him in the swim trunks and bare-chested at the pool giving Emily lessons, and again at Wave World when he was by Roxy's side in the pool. I imagine his manly hairy chest and abs dripping with water in the most sexy way! He will be "all man" for her, much moreso than he could be for shallow Heather. They will be happy together, especially in making love, and then having Roxy rest her head against his manly hairy chest.

Great entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

A good read for sure!

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You are a Master !!!!!

Congratulations !!!!

This is a great story but it needs a conclusion

First time in a long time I've read a longer story right through in one sitting. The storyline had me hooked almost straight away, and kept me engaged. A few typos here & there, which annoyed me because you're better than that! Didn't detract from my enjoyment though, 5 stars.

Brillant...really enjoyed it...5 stars

Definitely one of the best! What a 5 star story should embody!!

First, absolutely fantastic story. Maybe Romance. Maybe Mature.

More of them please !

Awesome story. I loved it. Write a part two where his college friends list her and she teases them with tight sexy outfits.

I loved your story. It was extremely well written.

This was an EXCELLENT story. Very well written!! Bravo!!

5 stars, thank you!

Thanks for all the wonderful comments. It is so gratifying to see so many folks enjoying my story.

I really enjoyed your story! I would resist pleas to write another chapter. The next chapter will be written in the imagination of those who read it. It is not a fuck story, it is a true love story. Bravo!

it is so good to read a love story rather than one based on sex I would love to read another chapter or two about how their relationshpip developed

For the many fans that have asked, a sequel is on its way and should be up tomorrow!

This 5 star story has the potential to be a classic Author. First they must get married and have more children. How they get there is your job Author, don't blow it.

Without checking the actual spelling...COMMENSURATE

not commiserate. (That would be misery together...:+))

Thanks.

I have to be honest and say I wouldn't have read on past the first page if the story hadn't got such a high rating. I wanted to see what all the fuss was about and was glad I carried on as I was hooked halfway through. Characters were great but it was a little cliche at times and the ending felt rushed. There were more grammatical errors and the sex scene was a little 'paint by numbers' for my liking. Sorry if that's a little nit picky, but if you want to improve as a writer, that's where I'd start. Overall though, excellent job and looking forward to chapter 2...

If I could have given this story TEN stars I would have! I am not nit picking about spelling or grammar.....This was just a well written feel good story! I will be watching for more in the future! Thank you......

Just like the first story I read of yours, this one went exactly right, just a perfect love story, keep up the good work and I will look for more stories from you.

This was a pleasure to read

I know it's fiction but how can you ignore the consequences of unprotected sex. Just a passing reference to what they're doing about it would be realistic and enough.

Minus a star for the cliche´ size of his dick and her boobs.

Seriously...not everyone likes either of those.

Try being original...

Also...I get this is more 'romance' than straight porn, but one so-so sex scene near the end and then a rushed ending?

Did you get bored yourself?

Still good, but can't give 5 stars.

Man what is it about you Texans? Best yarn spinners on this site. Must be in the water! Absolutely loved your story as I was sure I would after reading your Bio and seeing where you are from.

Got some advice for the folks complaining about the story and lack of sex in every other paragraph. There are lots of 2 and 3 page jerk pieces on this site maybe 90% of them. Some of us enjoy a good story with a little hot sex sprinkled around. This one was fine in my honest opinion.

Adding you to my follow list with my other Texas Yarn Spinners as I check out your past offerings. Don't want to miss any new posts!

5 stars of course!

Cheers!!!!!

SAGE

can't measure a man by age . just look at WW 2 18 & 19 yr olds going to war. i shutter to think what would happen today if we had to depend on what we have today

Yes there are a number of minor criticisms made that have some validity and it may be a little sentimental but I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Definitely 5 stars.

was grow up and

fall in love

thanks

Your story was great. Please keep on writing.

Dear Author, Another five star winner! Truly enjoyed this one, Thank you, jntiques/john

A very good story,though I would have liked to know what happened to Heather.

Very nice! Now where can I find Season 2 of Captain Marauder?

Got booted during comment so here comes attempt #2

At the end of page 1, I groaned upon seeing 7 pagers, auuuuuugggggg. But, I gotta hand it to ya dude, each page got me enthralled with your near flawless narration. Basically saw David mature in the words that seem to flow smoothly and a romance (aw shit, chick flick) developed into a no holds barred session the begged for at least, part 2. Outstanding, my eyes saw it. Onward Captain Marauder!

I enjoyed the story. Nice plot line. But, PLEASE, go back and edit. Wrong similar word at least once and double check your grammar and punctuation. It makes a difference. It takes me out of the focus on your story.

Nice story.

Didn't want it to end.

Thanks

Just OUTSTANDING!!!!

Thank you so much.

It was great

darkover , Lord your a fine writer ! This was one of the best stories I’ve read on this site , and I’m really not into romances per say , but i’d become impatient with my wife after several interruptions, lol . I just couldn’t put it down ! I’m so looking forward to the second part of this story , and I know if it’s half as good as the first half , it’ll be fantastic ! 5 from me

Please tell me there is more? I'm not much for romance stories, but this was a great read. Characters were extremely believable and real. I hope if there is a second part, you don't thrash the characters in an attempt to write a good story. The one thing I like is happy endings. Please? Please?

Enjoyed this story very much. The sex was good, cumming in her twice in short succession, as only a young man can do. The build was nice, a slow but steady progress to the inevitable, though Roxy seems to have outsmarted herself by trying to get David back with Heather, But it worked out in the end. The best stories are always the love stories, even with relatively little sex. This is surely one of them.

Grammar/spelling could use a little work, but I've seen much worse. Do read your work over-I read my stories til I'm sick of them, and still find mistakes in the finished published story.

If he's going to cum in her, how long til he knocks her up??

Moving on to chapter 2.

(1/21/2022) Hot damn!! There's a part two!! This is childish but I hope David gets to kick both Todd's and Alex's asses. Yes, yes I know Alex is only a tool. Oh, and how are mumsy and daddy going to react to their relationship? I bet Emily wins mumsy over. Sorry,...but I can only give this installment five stars.

I like your righting. The story telling is great. It left me wanting more

Are you serious?

"I like your RIGHTING:???

It made my pussy very moist ! 😜

Perfect-just perfect!

Not gonna lie, you made me well up at one point. This could be a movie. Should be movie.

Excellent, excellent writing. Proof reading and better composition is easy. Developing great stories and characters is a gift. Keep working at this a try to get published. You have the gift, buddy.

Great story...good character development and a very enjoyable read. Well done!

Great story. Superb plot. Well told and well written.

No more to say.

Terrific story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

Great story. Loved it

Great story,and great ending. Likes it a lot.

I am generally very critical. You didn't hit on any of my disagreeable tropes. IRL never marry a single mom. You come in 4th to 5th priority in that unit and will have all the responsibilities of a parent with none of the authority for discipline a dad needs to enact. In the story, however, it was a cute will they won't they with a buxom woman and a strapping lad. The guy wasn't too feckless. The woman was not domineering outside of the workplace. There were no random social justice PSAs that were hamfisted. It was a pretty compelling story that I read just to read and ended up just skimming the sex stuff. (Was happy about the creampie though.)

On another day I might be annoyed and point out that the drunk absentee father is a far less common archetype than the woman that just gets bored and maybe has an affair for the fun of it while taking the dad to court for everything he has including the kids. But today I realize that the dad and ex girlfriend offered excellent foil characters to push our fated couple into each other's arms.

Wow, just Wow, I can't say anything else

They can analyze this stir all day long it is wonderful!

Very good read.

Bravo!

I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for a lovely reading experience.

Wow... simply amazing. The story works out so well, with all the details and emotions in it. Thinking about David and Roxy together is literally giving me hard-on. Amazingly written. I hope the story parts keep on continuing without an end.

Great story...well-written and characters...

A couple of things, tho'...

It is taut, not taunt (her vagina grew TAUT);

AND, her boobs are ”coomensurate" with her size, not 'commoserate'...

A few grammatical and punctuation things/run- on sentences, confuses the flow some...

Still, Five**5**Stars...

Oops, should have edited my post...

Commensurate, not commiserate;

My bad; cannot correct if I do not correct myself...

Disappointment and angst marks the loss of youth...

Warm familial bonding and growth into maturity...

What are the possibilities?

Love and happiness?

Beautiful story lovely writing and very sexy! LOVED IT❤️

A nice story well told

The story was fantastic , it had a bit of everything and I loved the humour, great job ...

Spider phobia? Really?