All Comments on 'A Brief Encounter'

I thought it was going to be one of those rough fuck stories so pleasantly surprised by the denoument. I enjoyed reading it.

nice ending of the story!

I love the whole story... and was so happy for the ending and the way it turned out.

I wish more stories on this site were like this. Thanks for the superb work!

Fun story. Great example of getting the kink back in your marriage. Such a hot premise. Descriptions to get off a man or a woman.

a fanatasy was played out with the reality that could backfire for them in that kind of place.

Fun story! Love the ending!

Amazing HOT story, too bad more relationships can't be like this!

Very sexy. I've been enjoying the twists to your stories over the past few days. Your description is wickedly hot.

Great story development. I enjoyed your working on the preconceptions of the audience. Having your characters leading/misleading us up to the great "plot twist" of a happily married couple enjoying the pleasures of "role play" made the story all the more satisfying! Rather than just another lame attempt to make the hollowness of cheating look like fun, you showed the joy of recognizing the treasure you have and putting forth effort to keep it! Bravo!

About half way through encounter, I decided they were possibly a couple! Great story of couple spicing up their love life. Keep them coming!

I absolutely loved it! what a way to spice up the marriage !!! (by Lovesoftsex)

Hot little getaway. Love it.

P. S. Love the swan

Very well written. Loved the ending.

As a bonus, no malapropisms or atrocious spelling. Thank you!

What a pity, too many writers, painters, etc. just don't know when to stop. By going on they let the air out of a nice work.

This is one of those unfortunate stories.

The story would have kept its punch if the author had stopped toward the end of page one with the " just what I needed" comment, instead of turning it into a husband and wife fantasy.

Guess the morals police stepped in!

You can correct this error by not reading past "just what I needed. So much better.

A well crafted story that a male or female reader can enjoy. I thought it was going to be a rough fuck story too. It could have ended after the woman said, “I needed that.” as another reader opined. I like the way this story ended perhaps because it may be instructional for a couple whose love life has hit the doldrums.

This is the second of your stories that I have read. Much shorter than the first but with the same twist at the end. Excellent writing skills.

So many people tell you how to write a story when they have not written anything themselves. I would not be so rude as I don't think I could write anything and get it right. Thank you for another really good story. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

Good stuff!

I like your style and I certainly appreciate the lack of spelling and grammar errors.

Plus I always enjoy the couple acting out a fantasy story, I have done a couple of those myself.

Yarnspinnerr ;->

Love your stories. Thank you!

Clever, keep going

This type of story is so boring and repetitive. From the first paragraph it was obvious they were married and it was a set up.

Seriously, and I mean it, please rewrite the story... give her a reason to be there. Give him an actual story, maybe he's actually talking to the guys... create some mystery, or maybe some reverse hero twist away from damsel in distress.

You tried to give them a back-story after the action. Why read it if the reader has already identified them as just porn actors?

The whole thing was very cliche.

The only reason I'm asking for a redo is because you have a mastery of language and prose. You asked for a critique, so there you go.

Your descriptive narrative and sex scene is boner inducing, I think that could probably have extended to a bit of play on the way to the hotel, after all they were going to get frisky in the van on the way home.

You surprised me ! Really did not see the married couple, to each other, coming ! Very entertaining ! Well written. 5 stars. Keep writing !