All Comments on 'A Brief Moment of Insanity Ch. 09'

The game board is getting interesting. I still hold hope that the darkness will not prevail. Always protect your king. More please.

I do indeed like the change.....very interesting. Keep it up and I like the addition of Mike to the story line. Thanks!

Thank you for giving us a story and not just fucking. Having the good sex interwoven with a great story is hard to come by and you did a great job. I hope to read more of your stories.

Another player in this whole charade, i love it....

and sorry.. the minute i saw Roman Coin i knew, just knew a fallen angel would come into play somehow.... (i think i have read too much Dresden)....

but what has Louis become.. from the description.. he is some sort of 40K/Giger esque organic Machine creature....

I also loved all the other references.. and how you combined Norse Myth, with Native American Myth together...

keep it up.....

sounds like it would be a great addition to continue reading.

I for one really like your new character and world love to read more of him in the future.

Please continue with your new character in The Master Assassin

I love the way you entwined the other writers' stories into yours and extended the main storyline of them all. Would love to see what else you can dream up, with the help of the gods.

I have read all of your work. Yes would like to read more! Please keep it up!!

I loved the story, I wish that it keeps and on.

Please do continue the main story line (as well as Mike's) as I'd really like to hear what happens with the others...

I liked it and yes I want more!

you have created a well balanced read, please, please continue with not just this story but all the other collection of yours.....

The entire series of chapters draws you in. I would buy this as a book if added upon as an e-book.

Dude where's Mike story

I want to hear the end of this story.. the final battle.. not mike.. it’s been awesome!

Your story was weird but good, it's now gone off on such a tangent you don't know what's going on. It's like 15 different stories going on at the same time with characters turning up with no explanation. I'd like to see a resolution with Warren and the war but all this other stuff has made it very confusing. This is the first story of yours I've read and was enjoying it but it's now just so confusing. Hope you find a way to bring it together.

It seems like you have ditched your main charcter Warren and have tried to replace him with meaninless new ones. Its sad to see an author build a charcter only to throw him away.

It's been a long old read, mostly good but plenty confusing as you digress. Now I have completed CH. 9 and not sure how long ago it was written. Please don't leave us hanging like so many other writers do, bring it all together and keep up the good work!

After you stopped using warren things got confusing and it ruined the story since we invested our read in him then you dropped him...very sad. made me not enjoy this last one

Been looking for the master assassin story.

Like this one though.

Play Testers Wanted is a really good story though I miss hearing about Nick Shaw

you have a way with words, and I really enjoy your stories would really like to read more on Mike's story. Been stuck in my hotel room waiting for the air to clear up in oregon so this has definitely helped me passed the time thank you.

A truly brief moments of insanity in which you write your story. It has no head, no end and no direction. Awful.

I liked the story but who is at the door?

You write some extremely good 'novels', however my bugbear is that there are too many unfinished ones.

I realize this story was written some time ago, but I would like the author to revive it. As I said in "Comments" Chapter 1, this is the second science fiction incest story I have ever read. Having read about 600 incestuous love stories, this story change was amazing. The character and plot development was wonderful. The sex was not over done. Frankly, the sex added cement to the subplots but was not over done. I look forward to reading more of this author's work.

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