All Comments on 'A Broken Family Ch. 02'

Love the slow build up.. Ill keep reading!!

I like the tenacity of your vision for this story. Ill keep reading. Keep up the good writing.

Where is the incest? Come on!

You are doing a good job slowly building the story. To many writers rush the sex between siblings. Keep up with the way you are writing this story. Don't listen to the people that doesn't like the way you are writing the story. Take your time never rush for rushing never makes a good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

i love this story but lets hope that there is no more tragedy for this family

Just waiting for when she starts fucking a brother.

The whole mess of them is tragic. Done waiting for the story to lighten up.

...you seem to stop in weird places. I like the story and feel its well written. The story in not predictable like others I've read and I can't wait to see where you're headed with the storyline.

Lissa

After two chapters of dealing with a massive double standard, when are we going to see some push back against JT. Also if Eli has already had his time with at least one girl, when is everyone going to lighten up so she can at least date without getting the third degree. At almost 20, if I were her I would have moved out long ago. Just as an FYI, I am a father of three girls and in real life, even being an over protective dad, I trust my girls more than this.

This is supposed to be erotica. Instead im sitting here losing wood.