All Comments on 'A Cabin with a View Ch. 01'

A very nicely told story .What's the chances of them marrying or is that out of the question ?

Good story. Can't wait to read about the cruise! (Coincidentally, why was the story called "A Cabin With A View", when they didn't go on the cruise yet?)

Stepdaughters are hot............very nice story.............

An awesome and beautiful story. My favorite type especially with a virgin and daddy-type. Please write more!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you;

DKP

I prefer longer stories!!

Wonderful story keep writing and I will keep reading!!!

Really enjoying the story so far!

I won't bore you because it was just fucking. Now, it wasn't bad sex because, quite honestly, I've never had bad sex. But, as they say, I've never had bad sex, but some of that sex is better than the rest. This sex wasn't the better kind. Of course, I told Gretchen that it was great sex, but, really, it was just fucking.

@@@ Hell, Ive had bad sex! How do you know? (Besides the obvious, heh) When youre thinking 'I could have had a V-8!' And mean it! Lol. @@@

In fact, Gretchen was making tiny little lady snores.

@@@ hehehehe! My wife doesn't believe she snores! @@@

As soon as I got dressed, I went to find her so I could ask about how long she had been looking at me. I didn't know if she would mention this to her mother and thought that it would be better if I addressed this with her first rather than simply waiting to see what, if anything, might happen.

@@@ ...ummm, what difference does it make if she tells her mon or not? He was in his own bedroom anyway so its not like you did anything wrong, Mr. Guilty concious! @@@

. "The next thing she said is 'that cheap son of a bitch isn't gonna keep his promise to you. But if he'll agree to take you, go for it. And, as soon as you get on that boat, charge at least $1,000 of merchandise to the room number. He won't know about it until he's checking out. Get every thing you can out of him while you can 'cause he's no damn good.'

@@@ its truly fucking sad that there are actually people out there that are really like this :(

I could never understand people that refuse to take any responsibility for shit that happens in their lives, constantly blaming things on everyone else! The worst part is that they are only fooling themselves most of the time, everyone around them usually know the real deal :( @@@

I was so horny I wanted to immediately jack off when I got under the warm water but I thought I should reserve all my male fluids for whatever might happen later in the evening.

@@@ I'll never understand why authors like to write that into stories occasionally; of course he should jack off now, take the edge off and know he will probably last longer later because he did! reserve fluids? Not like you're trying to get her pregnant anyway so you could shoot dry and still be perfectly content! Lol. @@@

I eagerly complied, parting her pussy lips and entering her with my middle and fourth fingers.

@@@ ...theres a thumb joke in there somewhere, but Ill let it go, heh.

"No, it was only like three times, and, we were doing that 69 thing each time. The guys came so fast and then they stopped, like, they got what they wanted so why should they continue. It really wasn't all that wonderful compared to how other girls talk about getting their pussies eaten out."

69 is ok just for the fun and basic enjoyment from it, but I never really get much out of it (or a girl blowing me in general other than its nice) but worse, I cant get the girl off as well working upside down, lol! It just throws me off, heh. Id rather just get between her legs and lick her senseless! @@@

"I love you, too, sweetie," I said to no one other than myself. "We'll just have to find a way to make it happen."

@@@ Thats easy, you go to her place, pack her shit and move her in with you! Silly man! @@@

All steps should be so lucky

this story is better than the original. but... it saddens me when a grown woman shaves her bush. trimming is okay at least she still looks and feels like an adult instead of a prepubescent teenager. not appealing at all

great read. looking forward to chapter 2

Well written story with great characters. 5 stars

Next chapter. AAAAA++++