All Comments on 'A Caged Bird Sings Ch. 02'

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pampywampypampywampyover 11 years ago
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would love to serve a life sentence in that prison

Barnabe93Barnabe93over 11 years ago
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Agree with the previous comment. T_T

I need that in my lifeee!

thatlonewolfthatlonewolfover 11 years ago
feedback N shit

Very good sequel, liked it a lot

i like the fact that your characters have a lot of depth (right word?) like the inner conflicts of Odessa and the reactions of her friends, feels like it's straight out of a soap and that's a good thing, the way you describe her thoughts and feelings and the way it develops, it touches one

I'm wondering how Odessa/prisha will develop, your hints are/feel huge, like giant paintings on the wall, that only we can see and not the characters

also great sex scenes of course, the initiation kinda surprised me, as i was reading i always expected something else, not that i think that much when reading, just enjoying the ride.

ow and one more, small thing, could you - in future chapters - tell us and Odessa, what those unspoken rules are? what's the difference between love and sex acts? when is one appropriate and such?

I am quite ... fascinated by your storylines, if i may say so

shijujohnshijujohnover 11 years ago
Luv ur stories.....

Please write more stories. Stories about mature shemale fucking Mature women, lesbian would be equally good. I love all your stories. You are a good writer can't wait long to read your stories

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Your one sick, fucking disgusting little freak.

Tru_SaffronTru_Saffronover 10 years ago
so...

I enjoy the story but the whole swapping cum from my to mouth then adding butt juice to the mix sort of made me gag..... literally. I had to stop reading to allow my tummy to settle lol

It would've been just as profound if they all came in her mouth, then she just swallowed....... buuuuuut I'm sure others enjoyed it. I just felt like sharing my misery of that particular segment and good job on the rest.. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep it going

Very good keep up the good work and please continue this series

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
I want more

The cum swapping was so sexy, even more so when you added her ass into it. Please do more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Better and better!

I didn't think I'd ever be so turned on when it came to cum swapping. Well you changed that today.

Randee1958Randee1958about 8 years ago
Edge of my seat.😉

My exuberance over the patience you have taken with this emotional creation is so revealing. What happened to 4,5,6,? 😢

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Holy shit it’s a Madeline Celeste log omg

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