All Comments on 'A Cambridgeshire Summer Ch. 01'

Great start, well writen. Please give us more

a great first chapter, GA, so tender and erotic. I'm looking forward to further chapters. You've a fine talent for story-telling. {[hugs}} ~CG~

Your description of the aunt, feline, sinews, and her "stalking" behavior really helped flesh out her character. And her brief mention of a lover past -- hmmmm? Made me wonder who she was thinking about.

<br><br>Wonderful start, and I'm looking forward to the next installment!

Another fantastic piece x

I gave it a 4. If the next chapter's as good, it'll probably get a 5. No promises, though, we'll just have to wait and see.

Though I am, for the most part, a purist and fundamentalist about incest and the character's involved in the incestual and carnal sexual affair! This chapter of the series has, or will be, a threesome which--most of the time--is not my bag!!

Since there is another chapter I will postpone my further comments until the story ends, after Chapter 02. I will say the writing is very good, crisp, clear and succinct. The theme and plot is good; and the dialogue is intelligently expressed by the full cast of characters! And, the sibling lover's carnal and incestual, romantic love affair is true, deep, affectionate and devoted singularly to each other in love and as lovers; their admiration for each other oozes off their words they speak to each other!! Their love for each other is as evident as the brightest sunrise each morning!!!

2nd time around. I thought I read this before and didn't commenet to tell you how much I like it.

That was excellent. Wow! I have seen you on the personals but never realised your other talents. Great story and look forward to more

Always a five. I've read your stuff for years.

You confused the shit out of me, lol. There is no rating or comment box at the end of the story. It's a great tale with lots of potential for more. All of your stories are great as I go through them and you need to be told that. Many of the stories don't have this feature and that's your call but I appreciate you writing and entertaining us. Please keep up the great work and thanks again 😁😜👍