All Comments on 'A Change of Mind'

Ok this is a fantasy site. This story is a fantasy. Well written. It is dark but wilingly written by the author. I can appreciate it(and enjoy it) and take comfort in my own sense of confidence, moral code and self restraint.

Jamie describes her ravishment eloquently and passionately. like her character the events in this story left me breathless and wanting more, the mark of good fantasy writing! Thank you Jamie!

very well writen. Should have described both women's ordeals.

Would have been better if the men kept them for several days.

I would like to read about carmen's friend meeting with James and trying to find her Master.

Really enjoyed this STORY, very well written, could have read more

Great read. Well written and scorching hot. Love the way you write.