All Comments on 'A Common Situation'

Was this categorized EROTIC COUPLINGS intentionally?

i loved it. you write fantastic sex scenes - and great dialogue. well written - well done.

hope there's more!!!!

thanks

I think sexy Jason should have a bit of hair for his sexy muscular chest.

A completely unbelievable story, categorized incorrectly. Otherwise, meh... it read like all the other incest stories. Better grammar, maybe.

Anonymous critics are such but heads usually. This is catagorized correctly. No incect. (Technically)!

Story was really great. Nice dialogue, good set up, very erotic. Loved it. 5 stars. Hope there’s more!!

and play they did. Getting to know a horny stepsister must be stressful for a stepbrother, but it's possible to get over it--quickly when she offers sex.

Great story!

But it was better before the parents joined in... no way I’m sharing my girlfriend with Dad

Great story, until step mom...then dad with step daughter? Sorry, but that's just something that crosses from tittilation to unnecessarily raunchy. Your story has a great theme, thoughtful premise, wonderful detail in the lead-up...I would have stopped there, or developed the story with voyeurism. The climax left me feeling depressed rather than, well, for a lack of a better turn of phrase, climactic. Your writing is good enough, your ability to lead me through the story is compelling, and exciting. I was rooting for the young man and young lady. You had me hooked. I hope that you realize that your skilled! Your story didn't NEED that kick from the step mother. She dropped down to a drunken floozy, instead of a strong woman, with a lifetime of knowledge in being able to satisfy her needs with the man she loved. I'm feeling let down with the conclusion of this tale, and I'm only writing a response because the beginning and central theme of the story was so damned compelling. You truly had me! RonCabo, please don't feel you need to take your stories down every conceivable kink to make them more erotic, you're a talented enough writer to not need to delve there. Stop sooner, or don't dip so deeply into the pool of raunch. This story didn't need it. I am a fan of the first 2/3 of this one. I hope you're still writing now,in the waning month of 2020...I'm going to follow you. 4 stars, for the parts I really enjoyed.

Great job creating believable characters and you didn’t go so far out as to lose credibility. One could argue the ethics either way, but as long as everyone is amenable, I don’t see a problem.

The doubters obviously didn’t expect the group aspect, but I thought you handled it well. The only really unusual thing is the lack of drama is the developments.

It’s your story, and I think that you did a fine job.

5* and looking forward to more from you.

Good story till the parents got involved and sent it right to the toilet.