by Romantic1
Well crafted and believeable. An adventure, a thriller and OMG sexy! When does the movie come out?
What an amazing tale - you have a rare gift of telling a story well. The more I read the more hooked I became - loved it from start to finish - The story line is so believable and the sexual tension was just right without being over the top or smutty.
Well done - look forward to reading more of your tales.
Excellent story I just hope that you do write your novel and let us all know when it will be published and the title or it
I sent a comment earlier. I suspect that I signed off with the email incorrectly. For what it is worth, it is michigan_man_1958@hotmail.com
Romantic1, I want to say how much I enjoyed this modern fairytale. A well crafted lot-size of lusty adventure. All the anachronisms and blatant munchausens kept me laughing throughout your imagineering of the 80's.
I enjoyed every facet of this modern fairy tale. Your characters stand out; your plot unfolds in the exact tempo of a spy thriller reminiscent of Little Drummer Girl. I'll be the first in line to read the novel. Congratulations.
Kim debriefed our agents in Helsinki, then fucked them silly. Maybe you meant Kat?
Some of your other stories involve quite a bit of incest. Will you be writing a follow-up with his daughters Kendra & Kiley joining the 5 for some sexy fun?
Good story, and characters but seems like it was rushed to an ending.... I still did 5 stars but the end could be better....more details
Very enjoyable if slightly unbelievable. Thought end was a bit rushed but all told 2 chapters totalling 13 pages is a good story especially with the detail and the sex scenes. 5 again
Fantastic storey, but as for the comments below the ending could have been better. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️