All Comments on 'A Complete Education Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Oh Fuck! That was so hot!

What a great setup! Can't wait for more chapters!

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOTZZZZZZZZZZ

Great premise keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Promising

Keep it going :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
ok

runs together too much. although it's in the wrong category, it's ok.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
fell apart at the end

the past/present tense fell apart at the very end. Good story though. The ending just needs to be reworded and sured up.

xander74xander74over 19 years ago
nice set up

nice set up... perhaps a bit longer..

hoping to read more..

keep going!

Aditya_incestAditya_incestover 19 years ago
great attempt !!!!

nice plot and i expect a better ending

in the coming chapters...

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

hurry up and finch it .great story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Please don't leave us hanging

It is now time for you to bring it to resolution.

It's good, No it's great! Please carry on. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Awsome!!!

who care what the others say man, your story rocks. hope you post chapter 2 soon. to good to end it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Good stuff!

I look forward to a part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
needs more

having read chapters 1, 2 and 3 there still seems to be too many loose ends.Needs a chapter 4 !

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
great start

great tease. comments below i hope are wrong - i hope you finished this. great story!

RoperTraceRoperTraceover 4 years ago
What a couple of sluts!

Another great quickie.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 3 years ago

too slutty for me.....

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