All Comments on 'A Complete Education Ch. 03'

it is well written and the transition from fantasy sex to a step by step tutorial on pussy eating into a reality drama while tossing up and developing a wonderfully believable, bigger than life character in a few paragraphs is kind of epic.

Just discovered your writing with 'A Star is Born'. I sincerely hope my education is not complete.

MichaelG

Thanks. You do an excellent job of bringing realism to fantasy. I love finding gems like this and your other stories in the mines of Lit.

Am enjoying all the stories on your Orie pages. Am very impressed with details in your writing and the character build-up and interaction, You really can bring it all together. The EROTICA is very real and entertaining. There are many leads here for several more chapters and would enjoy following these up. Thanks for good work! I would name you a favorite author, but I'm not registered

Jomammy

I am thoroughly enjoying your stories. Each one has been incredibly well written, regardless of the narrator. I am looking forward to hearing about the vacation with the cousins.

I absolutely love this story. I'm praying you keep writing it. I'll be looking for the next chapter. You have a gift for writing characters that are totally believable, even when they're doing almost unbelievable things. Thanks for all the time and effort.

Loving the series. Write more please. Eagerly waiting for Ch. 04

This is an amazing story and I am ready for a brilliant chapter 4

i too am wanting/needing/desiring more - you have handled all your main characters very well - the sex is great - but even more intriquing are the spinoffs you seem to introduce with ease - im sure everyone wants to hear more about corky and her next poem - and i can hardly wait to learn if peter and his cousins do all the inappropriate things i have long imagined with my cousin - if only my shower scene had ended better

This is possibly the best story I've read on Literotica. Not because of the sex, funny and wild though it is; but because it is very literate. Your style is easy to read and your development of the characters makes a refreshing change from the many wham-bam-thank-you-ma'am fuckfests on the site. I hope you write more episodes in future.

A fantastic series and very well written can't wait for the next chapter. Pleaser keep going its too hot to stop now,'

Wow

Can't wait for more.

Please continue this series.

You started with Peter and Jimmie who meet Mary. They begin an interesting relationship of mutual exploration. Kelsey is added. Then you bring in Anna and the original plot line is abandoned in favor of a completely new one. Jimmy, Mary and Anna go off by themselves and we do not hear of Peter again. Then, all of a sudden, out of the blue (snow) Corky storms in displacing everyone from the your beginning premise. Oh yeah I forgot to mention the TA, and one line of, "He and Sally filled mugs",

Do you have any idea what you have written so far and even a faint clue where you are going next? What a convoluted mess.

I think you are one of the best writers on this site, keep up the great work. Don't stop now this is a really great story. Thank You

I hope you continue to develop the story and characters. Beginning to fell like a soap opera with graphic sex added. That's not a complaint. Just hope you continue the story lines and don't leave us hanging with our dicks and pussies exposed (and wondering wtf).

Well developed story that had me enthralled. I actually developed feelings for these characters. I definitely want to read more!

In response to Anonymous who wrote 'You are adding new characters faster than you can discard the old ones' - please carry on the way you are going. In my opinion, this is one of the best pieces of writing on this site and I, along with many others I am sure, am eagerly looking forward to the next instalment. Much better than the 'Wham bang' we get from so many other writers.

I've loved reading this series. The interaction between all the characters has been great. These people obviously care for one another as well as enjoying the sex. Hope to read more of Peter and his cousins, Anna and Corky, and any other combinations you come up with.

The absolute, best part was when Anna and Dorky didn't have sex. THAT is good erotica, knowing when to leave is waiting for more.

CORKY, you stupid piece of software.

I like how you've included pretty much every category of stories into one story, and so smoothly. I hope you continue on, I'll be watching.

Please ignore the AnonyMouse (all AnonyMice are cowards) who complained about adding too many characters. In the past, I have made similar complaints to other authors, but you're doing it in a very believable and tasteful manner. The ones I don't enjoy are where it's a couple kids, who add their parents, the neighbors, then grandma, the mailman, then the family dog. And the dog's groomer.

I'm eager to read more about Anna and Corky, Peter and his cousins, and also about the original small group.

What a fun episode, especially having a crusty, cranky woman involved. Inspiring to make it not all smooth sailing. Again, it brings a sense of reality and challenge.

Looking forward to Pete and the cousins next.

Liked every bit of it. When/where is next?

This adventure feels like a narrative base expanded by beautiful demonstrations of idealized behavior. Wonderful, creative characters moving through interesting, believable settings exploring the spectrum of sexuality.

I love your work, and hope other authors can use your writing as a springboard to expand their own creations.

Thank you for the experience. And, by the way I ache to experience all the ladies herein😍

Beautiful story. Interesting characters. Hope you continue the story.

Please continue the story. Would really like to see where this story goes.

Loving the story so far, would love to read more :)

Please write more about Mary, Peter and Anna!

Does Mary ever do Corky?

What happens with Peter and his cousins?

Your loyal readers, me included want more!

keep on keepin on, I really enjoyed this read. thanks and again MORE PLEASE.

There are so many opportunities to continue to explore in this series. You did mention the Rhode Island part of the story. And where does everyone go from here. Please continue. I know it has been a long time since you started this series but you are still an active writer so we encourage you to pick up where you left off. You are one of the few really good dialog writers and we appreciate your stories as a result.

After reading a number of Literotica stories, I find one that is really outstanding. An outstanding story is rare enough, but it is almost never that I find a story that leaves me like this one did -- gobsmacked, wondering "what the heck just happened?". I just stopped, feeling stunned. This story was already towering into the clouds, but the introduction of the Corky character rocket propulsioned it into the stratosphere. Obviously, writers have to be literate people (and are often college educated), so for an author to be able to give us working-class Corky with her colorful personna so different than than the college folks in attitude, appearance, clothing and especially language made it the highlight of what was already a great 5 star read. By the time I finished Anna's original phone conversation with her, Corcky was my favorite character. What followed cemented that impression. A big, heartfelt thank-you to the author.

This is already one of the best series on Literotica as is. Presumably, any additions will just extend its magnificence.

Paul in Oklahoma

It’s been a while since you wrote this so I was wondering if you were going to continue the story. It seems as though there is so much left to write about and you left this story at a cliffhanger moment, for all involved. Great writing.

Love to see part 4 come out.

The story was captivating and I really hope for more, a story regarding Corky would be great, but Peter and his cousins better!!

Why would an author end a series promising more and not delivering? Story is now over 8 years old and author has written more stories since. Now sorry I started reading this! Was so hoping story would continue from pussy whipped boyfriend Pete’s point of view since he is the original main character and the won with the most mixed feelings.

Promise another chapter and never delivering. Worst thing an author can do! Time to move on to another author after this letdown!

Fun, sexy story. Kinda ruined by leaving it unfinished.......

overall 10 Stars. ot just 5. Don't really understand why Corky had to be included. Just the 3 at the Cabin or the Cousins would have been enough. Now we will wonder if "pretty" Anna talks her way into licking the snake.

Orie, You are a great story teller. I hope that one day you are able to follow through on the teaser storyline and create more. Wherever you are, whatever you're doing, on this side or that, thank you for the the engaging, exciting erotica. ":o)

Well told ,and with the individual POV from each player in this play a very enjoyable set of reads - hope you keep it going - and hopefully Corky will be an ongoing part of things - also Stella? sounds like another excellent potential facet to this gem.

The story and characters were enjoyable enough that I read the three chapters offered. So, if you read this dear author, Please continue what you started.

I find that story going off in very unexpected and interesting directions. Please keep it up!

Another great story by you. Thank you. Erotic and engaging with good characters. Keep on keeping on.

Really fascinating characters, great storyline which you’ve left open for a lot of different avenues of exploration. I really hope you carry on with this series as I’ve really enjoyed it and would happily read more. I just love your style.