by puppop
Thank you for a wonderful story. Your writing conveys an easy, "comfortableness" between the characters that I found very believable and engaging. Your descriptions and development sometimes are a bit sketchy--but certainly enough for the reader to get a feel for what you are trying to achieve. Thank you again...and I wish I could write as well (as you) AND find as "comfortable" of a relationship as your characters seem to have.....
I am missing out on why she didn't confront her husband more? Sure, a good father and a wallet so don't leave him but when he just stops the physical contact and affection? Cheating is never good and shows she is weak. This guy needs tasty FWB only.
Beautifully written, thoroughly enjoyed the story line, the wordplay. Wonderfully descriptive. Thank you.