by WilliamsStories
I enjoyed both your stories that you have posted on Literotica. Both stories were ball bursting great! I really appreciate the detail that you input into the stories. My only personal preference would be that the older woman (Cougar) be in her 40s or even possibly early 50s. Hopefully, you will write about a very young man who enjoys screwing much older women.
A great follow up to Chapter One, only I missed the deflowering of the football player.
Great detail, great email messages, great sex scene, and well written. I am interested in the need for definitional detail some commentators need.
..thanks for your detailed comments!! Never fear....Ollie will be back hehe
...thanks so much...really glad you enjoyed the story. Don't know that I'll be getting an older woman in though...Lisa is there really as a vehicle for me to introduce hot young guys to the scenario....