All Comments on 'A Cruel and Unusual Punishment'

by leeanna19

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rachelanne542007rachelanne542007about 2 months ago

Looks like the beginning of something intersting

jrrtolkien420jrrtolkien420about 2 months ago

I hope you keep this going. So far I'm in and want more.

FYI fabulous profile picture beautiful.

leeanna19leeanna19about 2 months agoAuthor

Thanks, I loaded chapter 2 last night. It takes the mods here a few days to publish sometimes. Sex of sorts will start soon.

HOG57headHOG57headabout 2 months ago

I love the concept and you see the story just right. Thanks

pstg65pstg65about 2 months ago

Punishment, or dream come true?

Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago
I like this!

Great start. I hope there’s more to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Love it. More please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story so far. I do wish you would use the word panties instead of the word knickers. Just a personal preference, no big deal I just think it sounds sexier. I hope they gave him some thongs as well.

leeanna19leeanna19about 2 months agoAuthor

I use knickers because I'm English. No one here says panties. Pants are men's underwear here. Knickers are exclusively women's.

SuckergurlSuckergurlabout 2 months ago

Heavenly, you've got me all teased up, can't wait for the next chapter,5*

lucy_sometimeslucy_sometimesabout 2 months ago

I have a feeling that this land isn't that far away after all. 5 stars.

lucy_sometimeslucy_sometimesabout 2 months ago

As a Brit, I must agree with the author that knickers is the more usual expression for us. Panties is not nearly as humiliating. It is almost the same as pants. We have many other synonyms: underthings, unmentionables, underwear, smalls, crackers ...

... but knickers is undeniably girly.

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I write short stories. Mainly TV/CD and trans. Most of my stories and chapters are 1200-1800 words. I try to get to the action quickly. I know a lot of people just want to read a quick sexy story. I notice my trans stories get good ratings, but lower reads. I enjoy writing a...