All Comments on 'A Curve'

by jthserra

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ShadowRosieShadowRosieover 3 years ago

I'm sorry but it was almost too intense. Have you ever had a sensitive spot where if you touch it, it makes you jump out of your skin? Like a toothache maybe? That's almost how intense the sensations of overwhelming sensitivity can be, That's why she's crying. It has gone past fun into stress. Learn the stopping spot, slow down and give her a break sometime. It's a beautiful thought and a wonderful scene but the crying kinda hit the wrong button.

thomas_deanthomas_dean10 months ago

A cute love story

Keeping the love may require some innovations.

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