All Comments on 'A D.Va, the Faire & a Waffle Ch. 02'

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dwoelfledwoelflealmost 6 years ago
That was crazy good

This was a crazy good roller coaster of fun. Please keep this one coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good story

I am looking forward to the third part

inkandiridiumnibsinkandiridiumnibsalmost 6 years ago

Your creativity is a blessing. Thank you for sharing!

Lonely_readerLonely_readeralmost 6 years ago
Absolutely nailed it

It was even better than the first one....and I loved the first installment.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

gravyruggravyrugalmost 6 years ago
It's been awhile

since I read about this family, so it wasn't until "I have three moms" that I figured it out. Good to see them again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting

You have an good concept but you need to have someone else proof read for you there were a lot of wrong words or misspelled words. On instead of one type of things so don't depend of a spell checker.

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2/12/22 All 10 parts of "Super Friends With Benefits" have now been posted. This has been an interesting story to write. I started this as a stroke story with a little bit of a new angle I haven’t written before, but then a love story broke out. Along the way, I chose to ...

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