by HLD
Awesome job all in all, can't wait to read more from you.
Any time you are ready to add to it I will be anxious to read it. Thanks
This was such a wonderful read! I hope you add more to this story at some point in the future, I love these characters! :)
Great story standing alone, but it was even better to catch up with our old friends in Ashville. I was just sorry that Brian was not with the nice girl that he rescued earlier. Thank you for bringing these characters back and please keep writing. It is way too long between your submissions.
You’re my favorite author here. I’ve read Life is a Soap Opera several times and it just gets better.
Please continue this - it would be a crime not to!!!
It's difficult to find an author with the right mix of story and sex (for me, anyway).
Please use these characters for more stories. They are well developed and believable.
I "favorited" you, and this is only the first of your stories I've read so far.
I sincerely hope we all hear from you sooner rather than later. I love the entire series starting from the "Spring Break" series all the way up to here. Please write more about the family & their journey through life. You really are one of my favorite authors. Kudos to you!!!
Felt like there was more to it, the aunt started to drop a hint at the wedding that seemed to foreshadow something that wasn't explored, unless I missed it or is going into a sequel.
Great story though, great mix of romance, graphic sex and adorable humor
Favorite author status, and all the pants,pant, pants of a mid size orgy.
'Slut' is a multi-user slave...don't confuse your slave by using incorrect names. If you are selfish with your slave, she isn't a slut. 'Whore' is pretty straightforward; she makes money for her Master. Tempest was a lousy attempt at a sub character. She was excited by abuse, that doesn't make her submissive. The scene where Max broke her was annoying...an ill-informed 18 year-old might mishandle it that badly, but Max was older and hopefully intelligent enough to study up on a lifestyle he had never been exposed to before damaging Tempest the way he did.
Great story so far. Love to see more, though I hope they don't introduce another guy in their escapades.