by TxRad
This was not at all what I was expecting, and I loved it even more for that. Great characters and good job keeping the pace up throughout the story.
This is a unique story with a compelling plot. I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Sill it was a great read. Well written and a lot of fun. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Major Cajones
Great; tense, fast, interesting characters and plot. I'd like to see more of this tail ;) ! meanwhile I'm reading more of your stories !
That's what I like, imagination with sex, heaven and hell and a beautiful woman! awesome story!
Enjoyed the twists and turns. I was fighting the devil right along with Dan and Angelic with one hand while scrolling with the other. Sorry the story ended when it did but it'll be a while before I can help them banish another devil :)
An awesome way to combat evil: I'm down with that! A great story by a imaginative writer- thanks for sharing!
But, glad of this introduction.
If any other writer can produce similar imaginative stories, then I'm hooked.
A very good read... you really have a gift for writing. Keep up the Great work!
Great story :) - hope you'll continue this. Would really like to hear of their continued adventures . ..
What a great story, a five star fantasy in my book. Great visual descriptions and a few nice twists!
Too bad there isn't a sequel, I think would have been a great start to a 5 or 6-story series.
Could this possibly work as a series ? Seems like an interesting opening to one.