All Comments on 'A Dangerous Game'

I am rarely a D & D Incest reader but the military slant and the initial scoring drew me in. I know of the base too. Happily this was not a false rock and roll forever story. Had excellent build up and great sex.

Thanks for sharing.

...but then I'm biased.

The ending was very rushed, but the story was still hot and fun.

This line was great: “And then maybe I'll blow your corpse.” Haha.

I was waiting for this... Another masterpiece from one of my favorite writers! An exceptionally well written story. full of beauty, passion and desire... Thank you!

You are one of the best writers. Love your stories. Politician's Daughter is my favorite but this one is close!!!

Wish I could give it more then five stars! Excellent!

still the queen.

You should sell merch. Those tee-shirts would go like hot-cakes.

You are a fantastic writer and paint a picture for the reader like no other. the suspense of when the were going to consummate was fantastic and kept me hard. I hop[e we will see more chapters to this as it is not finished as it is now.

Only needed the opening few paragraphs. He bonked his daughter. That to me is the end. The thrill is reading and wondering if it happens or not. Knowing the end is the biggest spoiler of any story. Saved me reading 5 pages.

well-detailed and one of the best buildups, bar none. I actually thought you'd never get to them uniting, but when it really finally happened, it exploded. What a tease, a reveal and an ending. Nothing more to say. 5

This is really, really hot. The build-up was great and then the sex...jesus christ...the sex! Three scenes of blistering carnality. The pregnancy stuff at the end was fucking great too.

Please tell me there will be a sequel.

The teasing, buildup makes this a great story. Also, the attitude. Great job.

So very hot

Harleyusaone

One of the best I’ve read on this site.

I wish I could read a new story by you every day. You are so talented in your writing and you truly bring all your characters to life. This was fantastic! <3

I keep reading all your stories over and over again. You are so far beyond the best father-daughter writer ive ever read. You capture the best part of the relationships, tension, soft heartfelt romance and heated animalistic passion. I look forward to everything you write!!

Definitely hoping for a chapter 2

Always love your writing

The dripping tension and desire were spot on. The pace and length were about perfect for my tastes. I loved how they were equals in this story. The usual plots of daughter molesting dad, or dad deflowering his girl can get old

All that foreshadowing about anal with no details. :( Such a tease! And it's really, reeeally ok. Awesome writing!!

A perfect joining of talents.

Love this!!

Just what I come to expect from you.

Love this story, it's well written and super H🔥T

I think this is my 3rd time reading this, its definitely my top 5 daddy/daughter stories!

Such a wonderful read... always! all your amazing stories...

So well done and delicious i regret its end - and some of the fives I have given others. Thank you.

"A Dangerous Game:" - Forty-five Year Old Married Father, Greg and His Second of Four Children, Nineteen Year Old Jennifer.

Normally I don't award Five Stars where there is NO major risk/reward of impregnation of the mother, daughter, sister, aunt, niece and/or grandmother. I pondered awhile between Four or Five Stars for several hours before making a rare decision of awarding Five Stars where impregnation had not occurred. First, the quality of writing of this story blew me away, me priding myself on being a wordsmith; the story is such high quality, high caliber and smooth reading of ANY story I've ever read here on Literotica, and several other quality pornographic sites.. Second and most important, after father Greg--possibly subconsciously--mentioned "our baby" during an intense pussy pounding of his daughter, and later admitting that their father/daughter affair would continue indefinitely (paraphrasing), I had "sufficient faith" (it is fiction after all) he would be a man of his word and eventually impregnate his daughter with a couple or more children!

The impregnating of daughter Jen would only occur IF writer 'Carnal_Flower' were to deliver another similarly high quality, very unique, and flawless Chapter 02. Of course, worse, I could use my fricking imagination. Bummer!! After all, this being 12 September 2021, it has been just over three (3) years since this epic, marvelously "nut shattering" was written, her last masterful offering. Being a veteran, several times, I'm partial to the theme, and an ideal plot.

A bit strong and dick-obsessed for my usual taste... But the writing is so good, it carries the story along just fine. Very classy and convincing. A credible psychological study as well as a very hot tale.

So hot!! Another great read by this author. Loved it!!

I would have given this story 4 stars but I just don't understand how getting the daughter pregnant as being hot. I've seen too many young ladies ruined thei

A great story. Dad is an ass, daughter needs help, but in fantasy it is so hot. Thanks,

LISA SEEMS LIKE AN ANNOYING SHOW-OFF BITCH!!

MC IS A PUSSY HOUND

This is a very steamy, twisted read. I hope we get to see more of Daddy and Jen together. They’re sexual soulmates and hope they have several babies together.

"A Dangerous Game:" - Forty-five Year Old Married Military Officer, Craig and Nineteen Year Old Virgin Daughter, Jennifer.

First, in my comments fourteen (14) months ago (today being 03 September 2022) I misspelled father Craig's name; I should have done a better job of prof-reading. My apologizes to an excellent writer/author 'Carnal_Flower' for my sloppy oversight.

My comments previously expresses my sentiments still--this story and the character's roles as so uniquely, so explicit and detailed makes my emotional libido and blood boil. Daughter Jennifer should have expressed more conversation more. After all she was half the character roles. I will say I'm pleased Father Craig did not act on his thoughts of scat-fucking his beloved daughter. At this point in time Daughter Jenifer, fourteen (14) months later, has delivered her and her father's first child; the father, to everyone except Jennifer and Craig, will always be an unnamed "ex-boyfriend!"

Again, writer/author 'Carnal_Flower' is an excellent writer; her imagination is phenomenal producer of a great father and daughter incest love AND romance. There's true feelings that are exhibited throughout the complete story theme, plot and the character's roles!! Accolades!!!

God, I this was so good. I hope there is a further installment or several more. Have daddy and Jen end up having so many babies together. Or run off together

This was really good! I’d love a follow up of their shenanigans together. Have him breed Jen

This was amazing!! More please!

Pregnancy is out of the picture--makes no sense--takes away from all of it. I don't know why that is such a turn-on for so many. It adds an unnecessary detracting element.

Was a good story up until the point where pregnancy became an issue. Baby stuff has no place here. Went rapidly from 5 stars down to 3. Too bad . . . .

More please! We need a part 2

So dad and daughter hugged and all the sudden knew they wanted to bang each other?

Wow. I have absolutely zero nice things to say about your story. That's impressive. I'm not going to bother writing a critique, you won't listen.